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| "Beyblade Series 1: Reloaded" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] | Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2008 20:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ummm, I was just stating that in the last version you had Ray down as prince of Io and was wondering why it changed. But thanks for clearing that up anyway. As for the story, it's looking great so far. Oh and before I forget, please update soon. P.S.: [you may ignore this if you wish.] I know this may seem rude, pushy, and irritating, but I still can't help but wonder how the original version would have turned out. Think you could send me a draft of the original or something. Not that I don't like the new one or anything, I love it. They're both really great stories and I can't help wanting to know how both of them turn out. What can I say, I'm a die hard bookworm. Or, in this case, a cyber-bookworm.
| Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2008 18:23 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was finfiction.net, this is mediaminer.org, and I have seen plenty of betrayal fics in here. Anyway, in reference to your most recent update: it's good to see a clearer connection to the previous version of the story, but wasn't Ray the Prince of Io last time. And the storyline of their past lives is pretty good. But don't you think it's weird to give 14 yr.-olds memories of being at least 28 yrs. of age!? Other than that, I can't complain too much.
| Title: old style
Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2008 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you change it, there was nothing wrong with the old version at all. At least in that one Ami didn't act so evil and cold-hearted. Not only that but she also kept her name (which was much easier to pronounce). The story made much more sense with Ami as Tyson's twin (and as a sailor moon/beyblade crossover). Though Ami's cat-like bit-beast is a lot cooler than her previous one. It also makes more sense for an AmixRay pairing that way. P.S. I'm not saying that this is a bad fic or anything; it's really pretty good. I just like the old on better. Plus, if your gonna change the storyline you should also change the summary to avoid confusing new readers. P.P.S. You have my sincerest apologies for my overreacting in my last review (and probably in this one too). There is a lot more I could say about the changes in the storyline(some good, some bad), but I think it would be best if I just stopped while I'm ahead. (wow, this is the longest review i have ever done)
| Reviewed By: Blue Wolf Girl [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2007 19:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY DID YOU STOP?!?!?! this is too good a fic to just stop in the middle of it. IT HAS BEEN ALMOST FOUR YEARS SINCE YOU LAST UPDATED AND THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!!! SO GET YOUR LAZY REAR IN GEAR AND START WRITING!!! P.S. I curious as to what would happen if the rest of the scouts showed up.
| Reviewed By: LostandLosing On: June 19, 2007 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I love the new Ami, she's perfect. You certainly like Ami don't you? Her going out with Ray, now that's certainly new. I love it.
| Reviewed By: Merc On: October 01, 2004 21:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kwel fanfic! Nice wrk with the brother-sister,boyfriend-girlfriend dyamics You should write anthoterc chapter. P.S. Read Starcatcher's fic, ANIME DEATHMATCH!!! P.P.S. It s HILLARIOUSY FUNNY CHARCTER-BASHING TO THE EXTREME!!!!!!
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