| "Hidden in Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: rAiNwAtEr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2005 22:04 CDT
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WOW. This is my first time reaing a story with this pairing. I have to say that I find it very interesting! I hope you turn this into multi-chapter story instead of a one-shot. I really want to know if a relationship could grow between A/M. Please continue this story!
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Reviewed By: kittycow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2004 00:31 CST
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*another review-check*
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Reviewed By: ~ Akari ~ [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2004 06:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
*blushes* nooooooooooooo Momiji-kun~!*sobs* poor Momiji-chan~! *beats Akito to a pulp* Buuuttttt...I would like to see another chapter to this! Have alotta people find out about it, and it'd be so awsome~! (Plus some more Momiji/Akito action w/ some Kyo mixed into the lot~!) *wink wink* I liked this! Update soon~!
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Reviewed By: kittycow [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 20:05 CST
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Hmm... >_> im doing a post to see the rest of the reviews since that seemed to work on my other fic... but other than that! Thank you all for reviewing. ^_^ and my advice was that next time to make sure i see it, you can email me... me likes emails.. and i'll always write you back! ^.^v
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Reviewed By: Child of Ice [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2004 00:31 CST
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*LOL!* Akito! "Kyou!" oh that will ALWAYS be timelessXD I like the fic! The lemon was nifty and Momiji and Akito kick ass so it was fun to read about them fucking(XD) I REALLY hope you add another chapter! (can't wait!) ~Shoko
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Reviewed By: Anastasia Khushrenada [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2004 08:27 CDT
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Woah... that was an interesting pairing.... It makes me wonder what Kyo's reaction would be... I can't imagine him being to happy about it. Actually, I can see him bashing the hell out of Akito. Momiji's reaction is understandable, as well. maybe a little to agressive, but i suppose, given the circumstances, he needed to be. If Hari found out it might be interesting as well... especially seeing as in the Anime him and Shigure seem to be the closest with Akito. Well, I did really enjoy this. Keep it up! I would love to read a sequel. Anastasia
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Reviewed By: dragoneyes On: October 22, 2003 19:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmm. I've never seen a momiji/Akito fic. I really like it. Its interesting and I can't wait to see how it develops. I hope you keep writing. Your plot ideas seems to be really good.
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Reviewed By: Silent Cherub [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2003 12:23 CDT
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Ohh... you and I must have been thinking the same things at one point, right? I mean, some things were very familiar to me. Cause I had been thinking exactly the same once. :) Like... Momiji crawling into Hatori's bed and telling him he had a bad dream. That's so Momiji. ^_^ Anyway.. to get back on track... ^.^' Good story! Not to forget pretty interesting, original and... not likely to happen. :p But hey, that's what fanfiction is for, right? Besides... it has Momiji in it *and* it's yaoi. ^__^ What else does one want? Hm... well, maybe some yaoi lemons starring Hatori as uke? *shrugs* That would be nice too. Anyway... ^_^' I ought to stop rambling. Just keep up the good work, hm? Ciao! :)
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