| "I Can’t Make you Love Me" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: darksqall On: December 03, 2003 13:14 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good fic i have s sugesstion but i dont write fanfics sorry....... maybe each time they see there freinds they will be reminded of eachother.... kagome with the guy in school... inu yasha will be reminded from kikyo well have fun writeing
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Title: i can't make you love me
Reviewed By: gigi-chan On: November 16, 2003 12:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi... here's a suggestion. how about you tell how the two would-be lovers come together after the wish they made. maybe like - as the days go by in their own worlds, little things and circumstances remind them of each other therefore making them realize the feelings for the other was more than what they thought? but don't forget to put some twists into it - like an inuitive instinct on inu's part about kag being in trouble. i know it's been done over in so many other stories, but i can't get enough of the "inu rescues kag" routine. i really hope this helps you out a bit though it may not be much. but i'd really like to see you finish this story. alright? laters!
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Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 17:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
It's going to get better between those two right? I'm waiting for the update.
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Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Fanfic Leserin On: October 13, 2003 09:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like your story. So Please update soon!
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