| "Oh Repeditive Yet Ever Changing Future" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Spelling?
Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 10:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it I really did! .....But Your spelling REALLYY sucked!!!If You want I could edit it...But only if you want.....Get back to me at lovelylisious@msn.com
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Reviewed By: Krissy_Star_666 On: November 03, 2003 18:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think ur getting somewhere with this peice. The characters are not too confusing and the plot is getting better as the story goes along my suggestiions are that u fix ur freakin grammar mistakes and that the main characters should be of course Hitomi and Van hinthintBIG FREAKIN ROMANCE!!!hinthint
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Reviewed By: jkfeg On: October 17, 2003 04:49 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Update I like this
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 21:14 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good start lets see where it goes from there hope the next update is soon well later 4now
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Title: Good Luck!
Reviewed By: MorganEdasil On: October 14, 2003 14:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, what's with the letters around the speach? shouldn't you be using "***"? *shrugs* i like how it's going so far, hopefully you can post a few more chapters, it's great so far, not very good with rating anyhow:$ but i think this could be a really goos story! keep up the good work!!! MorganEddasil
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