| "From A Broken Hikari" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Reviewed By: Paniwi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 08:24 CST
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*sob* omg *sob* that was *sob* soooo *sob sob* friggin sad, but beautiful *sob* as wel *walks away sobbing and clutching a yugi-plushie*
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Title: *wail*
Reviewed By: Ceribi Motou [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 18:19 CDT
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Great Ra that's so sad!!!!! I was almost sobbing when I read this!!!!! You must do a response from Yami!!! -Ceribi
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 15:12 CDT
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Awww...poor Yugi! That was so sad. How can Yami be so heartless? Anyway, I love it, I hope ou add more to it!
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Title: Dude...
Reviewed By: GeminiElf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2004 22:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Besides a few spelling errors, this fanfic was awesome. I was literally sobbing when I read this. Poor Yugi. You really should continue this story. It is amazing. When I read this, I was like, "Okay, a little confusing, but wow. If I were Yugi, I'd beat the crap outta freakin Anzu." Personally, I hate Tea. You totally have a way with words.
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Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 22:28 CST
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I feel stupid reviewing twice,but i just want to apologise for my choice of words.They were very inappropiate and i am truly sorry.Even though it was all true...*Behind her is a punching abg with a pic. of Anzu that has a hole on the bottom and sand coming out* I think i need a new punching bag...good thing i have extras! ^-^ You could never get bored from punching Anzu...
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Title: Aww...
Reviewed By: Seto_YamiMyLovers [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2004 22:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww... Yugi is so sad...makes me want to cry.I can see why you won the contest.Makes me feel anguishy... Is that even a word? O.o Uh...yea. But,im glad im in that mood,now i can start on my Angst/R YGO! Month fanfics.It's just a little special even i'm doing.I also can do my Valentine Special.It's a bit late,since i don't have enough votes. Oh,you can vote too! =^-^= Name 5 anime,a pairing for each,and e-mail me your vote.Thanks! Anyways,great fic. Harika Huynh P.S. Just like 'al',i hate Anzu.It's just that 90% of it comes from fanfics.,the other ten is HER.That little mother fucking ass bitch daughter of a devil fucking sex craving slut! *Glares at Anzu plushie and stabs it with a katana until theres cotton flying everywhere* *sighs* There.I'm calm now.*smiles* =^-^=
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Title: nothing
Reviewed By: sorry On: February 06, 2004 23:54 CST
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i love your story! i love storys when yami n friends abandon yugi.tat makes them sooooooo ssswwweeeeeeeetttttttt. me want more! me want more! me want more! me want more! me want more!
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Reviewed By: ssssswwwwwweeeeeeettttttttttttttt On: February 06, 2004 23:49 CST
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Reviewed By: al On: January 29, 2004 01:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahhh! 70% of my dislike for anzu comes from fanfics. ohh gross. she must be blackmailing Yami! thats the only way! hikari and yami can not be seperated naturally!...
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Reviewed By: Lady Sephiroth [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 10:06 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic. I actually thought it was Yugi writing it for a minute. ^^ There are a few spelling errors though that you might want to correct before you consider a continuation. But it was really good-I thoroughly enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: chocolate On: October 13, 2003 18:38 CDT
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Ok, wow, that was great. You have to make this a chapter story. So many ideas come to mind of what you could do....wow, that was so, wow. You got me all teary eyed and stuff. Please think about adding chapters. If not, oh well, it was good anyway.
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Title: oops!
Reviewed By: Yamis Girllfriend On: October 13, 2003 17:02 CDT
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ok hi! well sorry to everyone but those words aren't supposed to be underlined. so jsut ignor them. it's just when i type my computer does that. ya know those squiqly lines under words it think you messed up on. well thats what it is. ahain sorry. did any of that make sense?
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Reviewed By: Yami no Katya On: October 13, 2003 15:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aww...Poor Yugi! I'm such a sap when it comes to Yugi-angst fics...I love 'em, even though Yugi's my absolute favorite character lol. Just a question. How come random lines are underlined? lol You didn't do a very good job there. Other than that it's a great story. Please write another chapter...like where Yami finds him and either prevents him from killing himself or goes on a MAJOR guilt trip (YES! FEEEEEL THE GUILT!). Please continue!
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