| "The Forbidden One's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
Reviewed By: toasterwoman360 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Plz!
Reviewed By: yuni On: June 12, 2005 18:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and write more chapters. I cant wait any longer.
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Reviewed By: animelove (nl) On: March 13, 2005 00:35 CST
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Hiei was an S class demon by the end of the series...when is this taking place?
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Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:27 CST
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I can't say much cuz I have to clean. So I'll shorten it all by saying this is very good and update soon cuz, ah I'm busted bye. ~~Kuramas Gurl~~
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 11:55 CST
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Okay, glad to see you made it back to this one. Sorry to hear that you're going to have to move and restart with another name ... although, if the computer is hanging on to your p/w for you, why don't you change it to something easy to remember now before you move? This really is a cute story and I would like to see how it turns out eventually. Good luck on your move!
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Reviewed By: InTheShadows [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2004 08:21 CST
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GREAT FIC! I love it! Especially the character a little sarcasm and a little smart ass-ness and plenty of curiosty does make a Neko! I love how she acts all the time it just great listening to an arguement from them! Anyways great story UPDATE SOON!!!!! -InTheShadows.
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Title: You are an awsome writer!
Reviewed By: Sarah-Chan (I'm not logged in) On: November 06, 2004 20:13 CST
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Your fanfic is SOOOO awesome!!! I LOVE IT!!!
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: November 06, 2004 13:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your welcome. Everyone forgets his name...well, except me...since i practically remember everything with Hiei in it...
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2004 11:02 CDT
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pingpong- Hiei got knocked on his ass by a girl!! *give Hiei a noogie* Yami pingpong- heh, that IS funny *pats Hiei on the back* It's ok bud, pingpong'll make sure Kohono makes up for it! ^_^
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Reviewed By: hiei obsessed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2004 20:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
THAT"S IT?!?!?!?! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE!!!! i soooo want to read more!!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!! please update ASAP!!!! please... this is a really good story and with sumer approaching i'll have time to read
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Reviewed By: Ryuko [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2004 21:51 CDT
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haha! very nice story. although whatever your reason for having Hiei seem so weak better be good. that was a cool idia with Yusuke letting it slip that Hiei was Yukina's brother ^_^ you have tons of origonal idias in this story! (which is why I like it so much) update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: animelove(nl) On: May 21, 2004 00:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cute! Not at all Fluffy! Even though i like fluff and all.....by the big ______ sign when Yukina was talking, do you mean Torukane? the big bald evil guy whom hiei tried to kill, but Yukina said don't?
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Reviewed By: mental [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 23:38 CST
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'Sup I just read your fanfic and I reali like it but I think you should put some more comedy or I'll stab ya with this piece of glass and hey what's this red stiky liquid on my computer oh crap I got boold on my keyboard oh this ain't the first time oh and for the manes I got some.Here are the names for boys:Masashi, Hikaru, Eiichiro, Kazuki, Yoshihiro, Toya, Sasuke, Kenji, Katsuya, Suichi, Hiroto, and Daisuke.For a girl:Rumiko, Akari, Keiko, Hima, Rina, Sayaka, Eri, Katsumi, Yumi, Anzu, and Yui.Well those are the only ones I know and I'm brainless I mean I have nothing to say but I do love your fanfic and tell your cousin congtarulations and I hope she has a healthy baby and I hope the father is man enough to take care of her and his child well please write a new chapter soon I love your fanfic well gotta go and kill my doctor for prescribing me steroids bye bye (^_^).
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2004 12:07 CST
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haha, review more huh?? then write more ^_~ But I liked the chapter ^_^
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Reviewed By: kawaii yasha [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2004 15:15 CST
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update or die
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Title: continue
Reviewed By: cacatrice On: March 02, 2004 15:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope you update soon
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Title: Interesting.........
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2004 16:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very interesting but I have to agree with Mithile that you could add a little bit more detail and liven' things up a bit. No offense, I'll continue to read it but yeah, a little more please. Anyways, I have some names if it's not too late:(all first because I don't know any middle)1. Aika 2. Arina 3. Asuna 4. Karina 5. Katsumi 6. Kimika 7. Machika 8. Maina 9. Momoka 10. Yasuka 11. Yuika 12. Yuzuna That's all for now but I can put/give you more names if you'd like. (Um some/ all the names, I really kinda don't know what they mean so you might want to check before you use them) Bye Bye!
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Reviewed By: Baka Kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 21:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think its good so far.... please update!
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Reviewed By: Mithile On: October 21, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, it definitely has the potential to be good, but you need to put more into it, liven things up. I wanted to keep reading, but there wasn't anything there, and that doesn't really encourage me to come back. (I don't mean any offense- you just need more detail and more chapters.) :)
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Reviewed By: StormAZ [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 00:35 CDT
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Well, you have my interest ^_^ a demoness that can plant Hiei on his backside? This I want to read more of ... ^_^
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Reviewed By: (¯`·._.·Ash ·._.·´¯) On: October 14, 2003 22:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I found it a wonderful story and I am anticipating the arival of the next chapters. Keep it up, you show a lot of promise! Thanks for reviewing my story by the way! (¯`·._.·Whispering Butterfly·._.·´¯)
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Reviewed By: Saiyan_Kitsune_Foxfire [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its intresting and shows promise, Please continue. Maybe you could review my Fiction its called Pine roses and Lavender. ~SKF
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