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| "White dragon Golden Phoenix" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] | Title: ^_^
Reviewed By: Gwinna On: October 20, 2003 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so sorry I'm still bugging you....heh....^_____^But I like what you've added to the story! *sniff* its so sad....sad that we all can't have Haku....Chihiro, you lucky, lucky girl! ^_^ Great addition! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: Me, Dragon_Shaddow!
Reviewed By: Gwinna On: October 19, 2003 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm a member now and I just uploaded on of my old fanfics! I commented on yourse; so please say something about mine!! ~_~Please?
| Title: Me, again!
Reviewed By: Gwinna On: October 18, 2003 16:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just wanted to say: I saw the movie, I love the movie, I love the fanfics!!(I love Haku....~_~)heheh...
| Reviewed By: Gwinna On: October 18, 2003 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 3 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um, some hopefully kind critisizing here...... Slow down a little. I mean, you've got a great idea going here, but besides the fact that this is pretty much along the same lines as the move(mostly only in little parts), try thinking every detail out. Take this story, read every - thing that happens in little peices, take what you see and expand. Pile in the details, girl! Just jam-pack it with detail. Then write more about what the characters feel about everything that happens. Do you like to read? If you do, get one of your favorite books out and study how the auther captures the mood and every instance of the story. Oh, and Haku got his name back, BTW. Nigihyami Kohakunushi, remember? He's no longer slave to Yubaba, and if he chose to stay in the bathhouse, than he can be himself, even around Yubaba now. He doesn't have to act stern in her presence. He has his name; hence, he has himself back. Keep writing, and improove!^_^I can't wait to see your next one!
| Title: I know!!!
Reviewed By: Inuyashafanficwriter [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 16:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
i know you might not like the anime or seen it but you really don't have to understand to read this soooo please read!
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