| "Fire and Ice meet" Reviews/Comments [ 14 ] |
Title: Fire And Ice Meet
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 12:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
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Title: Fire And Ice Meet
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 23:34 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2004 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome lemon. Very intense. It would be nice to see what the rest of the mating ritual was like, since this was so hot.
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Reviewed By: yomofo On: March 07, 2004 03:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man you have a nice way of putting words together write some more because I need to beat off
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Title: super_jelly_monkeys@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Crimson Tenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 03:33 CST
Comment/Review:
the lemon is excellent. just one question. is the xel-kun you talked about in the disclaimer xelloss? if so, i just thought u should know, he's currently locked in my closet
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Reviewed By: Medatsu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 18:20 CST
Comment/Review:
Very well done...Couldn't have done it better myself! 2 spelling mistakes but that was the only thing wrong...
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Reviewed By: powerpuffbarbie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
0.0 Don't stop. continue. I know this is supposed to be a one shot but i want to find out what happens in the rest of the mating ritual. and why is it requiered when she goes into heat?
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Title: Damn
Reviewed By: writer03 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 00:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! that was an awesome lemon! i think it's the best I've ever read! Keep up the great work, I look forward to reading some other stuff by you. :-)
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Reviewed By: Amreld On: October 30, 2003 13:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*eyes widen* I AM SO JEALOUS!! I couldn't write a lemon if my life depended on it! I can write battle and arguments and all that like itsa nothing! but my fluff muse is broken! She doesn't want to let me write it! SUCK! Well, great lemon! It was AWESOME!! I won't say anymore because some peeps find it embarrassing that other peeps compliment them on their lemons...LIKE ME!!! -_-' Ja ne! Amreld the sky elf a.k.a Mitsukai no shouten
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 11:18 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lo! well, i think it was VERY good! yup yup yup! i gotta send this to my horny bastard friend! lol, well, good job and i like the pairing too! i like having diff. pairings! hehe, again, good job! -Lani
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Title: Thanx
Reviewed By: animechick824 On: October 14, 2003 19:49 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks for writing this for me. I really enjoyed it. I am putting a recommendation for this story in my author's note for my next chapter. Hopefully, it will come out soon. Sorry, I couldn't rate you on originality. Thanx again. Bye.
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Reviewed By: Nichole On: October 14, 2003 19:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great Story....Why Were You Worried About Writing A Bad Lemon...It Was Great...
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Title: Wowies
Reviewed By: Youkai Yume [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 18:43 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
....wow...That was sooo intense! I loved it! Please keep up the great work, I hope I can write a lemon as good as this when the time comes... ~Yume-chan
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Title: Wo...
Reviewed By: Helen On: October 14, 2003 13:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
~drools over keyboard~ Dang that was so HOT. I practically had to call the fire department to cool me off. Anyway, thanks for this awesome lemon. Ja ne!
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