| "The New Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Lemony Fresh On: December 03, 2003 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
y tha hell is inuyasha such a pervert in this fic?!?! hes worse than miroku could EVER be!!! ROFL!!!! omg ur fic is so funni! u gotta update it again soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 15:51 CST
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Really good chapter, hehe he got slapped. Well that's what he gets. As for the conflicts and what not yeah if you can think of something good. I'm not sure what it could be though, maybe revenge on Naraku or Kikyo, something like that. If you aren't up to that the good stuff is always good.
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: December 01, 2003 15:48 CST
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conflict that was funny at the end of the chappie
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 15:29 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really funny chapter except when kagome almost died can't wait till your next up-date
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Reviewed By: Higurashi Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 23:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
really good so far hope u up-date soon
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Reviewed By: aishiteru_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2003 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about the quotation marks. You explained how you had to do it and the bold lettering works out fine for that, and the italics for thoughts. So don't stop writing just because the site has a problem with your computer program. The story reads well, you can follow again really good. You've got some near misses (or should I say near scores) and I'd like to read when Inu/Kag get together. Please keep on.
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Reviewed By: RekkaS On: November 23, 2003 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm really enjoying it so far! My real name is RekkaShinen but it won't let me sign in just yet... *sighs* oh well, keep up the good work and please update!! I really want to know what's going to happen... ^.~ v
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Reviewed By: notzathros On: November 21, 2003 19:35 CST
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Good fiction. Looking forward to more. I would have reviewed earlier but the fiction just showed up today. Please keep at it - at least until the lemony part . Thanks for writing!!
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Reviewed By: Kaye [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 14:48 CST
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I like, I like!!!! Wonder if he'll save her, or if she's even her. Really good!
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Reviewed By: feywitch17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 10:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't worry about the silly quotation marks! We're not stupid, we can figure out when people are talking. Just keep up the good work!
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Title: don't stop!
Reviewed By: Inuyasha's Girl On: November 21, 2003 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love your story so far! i was so happy to see that you had updated. i hope that your muse finds you again, cause i can't wait to see what happens next!
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Reviewed By: ForEvaConfused89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 14:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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WOW great fanfic plez update soon before I go insane!!!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 14:08 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was really funny i hope you can update soon...
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Reviewed By: Elf10120 On: November 09, 2003 22:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i realy like your fic dont give up its really good and i cant wait till chap six
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: November 06, 2003 14:36 CST
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I like it, just every time I try and review mm.org f**ks up and says I'm missing info or something, when I'm not. Good chapter, I really like it! Please continue!!!!!
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