| "The New Friend" Reviews/Comments [ 58 ] |
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Reviewed By: Katina108 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 12:41 CST
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red... if you had read my author's notes you would know why I can not use quotation marks... I have microsoft works and not word and for some odd strange reason the marks do not show up
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 05:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
you really should try using quotation marks. you know, the ones that look like these "__" you use it when people talk, not just make the words bolded.
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 19:22 CST
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update.......................please i'm begging u to please update and soon i'm goin crazy
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: October 28, 2003 13:50 CST
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Really good! At least neither girl was wearing a white t-shirt, right? Anyway, really good, next chapter will be fun.
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 20:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao this is an awesome story
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Title: Mikey B23 is impressed!!
Reviewed By: Mikey B23 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 16:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Mikey B23 here!!! As far as I am concerned, this fic is going to be a Masterpiece!!!! Keep this fic goin man! You are doin awesome!!!!!! Mikey B23 out!!!!!!!..............
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Reviewed By: Kaye On: October 23, 2003 13:50 CDT
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Haha! I was waiting for that! Oh that was great! I like it! I'm wondering if Kouga is feeling differently than he used to, hmm. Really good!
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Title: the new friend
Reviewed By: gigi-chan On: October 23, 2003 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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first off... hope you're feeling much better and this chappie was funny. short, but nonetheless funny! hope you'll be able to update more often, but if not, then take it easy. laters!
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Reviewed By: Morlana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 22:57 CDT
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So far I like the first chapter, the only problem was separating the speech from the rest of the stuff.
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Title: Kill
Reviewed By: Ladykaa28 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 15:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If Kouga hadn't have pulled iInuyasha off of Kagome then she would have been in Inu heaven. Kikyo and Naraku I say kill them too, but I have other plans for their demise. I don't know if today is agood day for me to write reviews. So far in every review I have wanted nothing, but blood. Oh well.
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Reviewed By: Silver Talons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 21:22 CDT
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I likey but you need to put in marks to show that the characters are talking. write more soon! ja- sliver talons
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon82 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 20:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story i like it but i do agree with angelbabe about " " it really would be easier to read
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2003 19:54 CDT
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i really like it but you should probably use "" for the speaking parts and separate it from the paragraph so its easier to read...continue please
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