| "A Voice From the Past" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: princess cat girl On: November 16, 2003 18:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was good i think that you should have bulma tell them what happend and for her father to come looking for her but make bardok kick em out dont have vegeta do it becase thats to predictible then dont froget to make vegeta think of his mothers words of her hair and eyes will be the same color of thes flowers
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 03:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: trunksvegetafrodo [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 03:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: June16458 On: October 14, 2003 17:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Love story! Please new chapter soon. e-mail amandajune45@aol.com
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