| "From Friendship to Love" Reviews/Comments [ 296 ] |
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Reviewed By: Renzokuken [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2003 17:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please.... PLEASE write the nextchapter!!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEE!! i'm gonna die!!!!! torture i tell ya! that's what this is!! AAAGHHH!!
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Reviewed By: clyde the hedgehog On: December 14, 2003 22:24 CST
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hmm i thought that i should add that even though your grammar and spelling are a little.... lacking... i understand you said to excuse that and i have... i thought that you should know that even with that flaw you write beautifully- better than a lot of people who have flawless grammar so keep up the excellent work.
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Title: OMG
Reviewed By: yelly On: December 14, 2003 19:27 CST
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Ok im not goignto review much because im still crying and im serious. you sad that the hgih school they attened is model after your own. for that i am truelly sorry for you. my high school is way to big for that kind of SH*t 4000 students how could you get to know them all so theare are no popular kids and jock preps or what ecer there are the group of peple that act liek that but for the most part everyone is together prep jock goth the works are frinds and not afraid to be so. i have to complement on you writing it is one od the best i have read. by that way this story line seems to familiar. i think i watched a novela "sopeopera" in spanish basicall the secret love and the bitch women that is determed to have him even if he doesn't love her. Guess what im still crying Love it love it you are such a good writers :)
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Reviewed By: Relix On: December 14, 2003 09:10 CST
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UPDATE!!! WHAT THE F*** IS TAKING SO LONG?!?!
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Reviewed By: Fayli On: December 12, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the best! You most keep writing!! I must read more sooooooonnnnn. Put more up now!! I must know what happens or i will dddiiiieee. Oh know i don't see any more up!! What am I going to do HHHHHEEEEELLLLLLPPPPPPP MMMMEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!THE WORLED IS COMING TO AN EEENNNNNDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!! I'm dead thats to you!
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Reviewed By: INUROX On: December 11, 2003 15:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE REVIEW!!! YOU REALLY NEED TO KEEP Writing! Omg! the last chappie almost mademe cry! Plz. write more???
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Reviewed By: LOVER OF ALL ANIME On: December 09, 2003 16:07 CST
Comment/Review:
please update
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Reviewed By: clyde the hedgehog On: December 09, 2003 15:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! chapter 17 actually made me cry!!! i'm sooo sappy!!! oh my god i feel so bad for them- Naraku's eldest daughter heh heh i have a pretty damn good idea who that is which will make me happier later if i'm right but this story is really heart breaking at this point! i can't wait to read the rest of it!
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Title: hurry
Reviewed By: adamm On: December 09, 2003 11:15 CST
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hurry with the chapter this stall is getting to me. i must know what is happening in this story.so PLZ hurry with the next chapter. who ever reads this review bug the writer to hurry with the next chapter. it is a really good story one of the best i read.
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Title: *cough cough*
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2003 20:22 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOh man I'm sick...and I needed a good story to make me feel better...I wonder if naraku's first child is Kagura
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Reviewed By: LiL Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2003 10:53 CST
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omg! i hate u soooo much! i cant believe u did that to me! ahhhhh! *dies* i was excited and then it ended !!!!! uve ruined my life! well at least until u get the next chapter out, and it better be soon or ill die of a heart attack!!! ahhhh :cries: please update really soon!!!! (haha actually i love this story lol) LiL Elf
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Reviewed By: Whitney Lin13 On: December 02, 2003 16:03 CST
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OMFG!! Im sitting here crying and im angry at Kikyo. God i hate Kikyo. Hehe, i think youjust undid everything my friend told me. Saying Kikyo is just missunderstood in the anime. Forget that shit, she is just a bitch. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I cant wait to see what Sess and Mrs. Tama have planed. THERE IS STILL HOPE! WOO! Now im off to terroris the new kikyo voo doo doll i made. BYE!
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Reviewed By: zuppy70 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its to Fuckin sad!! *sniff, sniff* poor inuyasha and Kagome! Damn, I can't believe you made Inuyasha and Kagome break up! you have to up date this fuckin story soon! Its REALLY good! And REALLY sad! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! *gives puppy dog eyes* PLEASE!!! you gotta update soon or else I'm gonna die! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 07:54 CST
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OHMYGOD!!! That was sooooooo sad. I knew it that Inuyasha´s mother know the husband she has. Oh, please, make it happier...tell us that Sesshouamru plan will do good... and one last asking...please...KILL KIKYOU ;-) Update soon
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Reviewed By: Bab] [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 07:54 CST
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OHMYGOD!!! That was sooooooo sad. I knew it that Inuyasha´s mother know the husband she has. Oh, please, make it happier...tell us that Sesshouamru plan will do good... and one last asking...please...KILL KIKYOU ;-) Update soon
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