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Reviewed By: melannie On: November 29, 2003 20:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyy,i love your story and i really cant wait to read the next chapter! i cant wait to find out wut will happen now that inuyasha has signed the contract.-_- i cant believe he didnt read it! now he has to marry kikyou! omg i was so upset when i read that and i hope he finds a way out of marrying that BITCH! i cant stand kikyou and i wish she would just drop dead!!! ok now that that is out of my system(lol), the story is fantastic and i hope u make a new chapter soon. the reason i chose to give u a 10 on your style of writing is because it is uniqe and i would read any of your stories if the summery sounded intresting. the reason i chose a 9 on spelling and grammer is because u didnt spell a few things rite on some of ur chapters but i wanted to give u a high score^-^. the reason i chose to give u a 10 on originality?creativity, enjoyment factor, and overall rating is because i have never read a story like this and i think you have a uniqe story line, and i really love this story no matter now many times kagomes feelings were hurt and because u r a GREAT auther. if u kno when ur next chapter is plz email me at xxsexxygurl88xx@aim.com or im me at OxPiMpEtte89xO and jus chat wit me for a bit. well gotta go, peace out!
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Reviewed By: melannie On: November 29, 2003 20:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heyy,i love your story and i really cant wait to read the next chapter! i cant wait to find out wut will happen now that inuyasha has signed the contract.-_- i cant believe he didnt read it! now he has to marry kikyou! omg i was so upset when i read that and i hope he finds a way out of marrying that BITCH! i cant stand kikyou and i wish she would just drop dead!!! ok now that that is out of my system(lol), the story is fantastic and i hope u make a new chapter soon. the reason i chose to give u a 10 on your style of writing is because it is uniqe and i would read any of your stories if the summery sounded intresting. the reason i chose a 9 on spelling and grammer is because u didnt spell a few things rite on some of ur chapters but i wanted to give u a high score^-^. the reason i chose to give u a 10 on originality?creativity, enjoyment factor, and overall rating is because i have never read a story like this and i think you have a uniqe story line, and i really love this story no matter now many times kagomes feelings were hurt and because u r a GREAT auther. if u kno when ur next chapter is plz email me at xxsexxygurl88xx@aim.com or im me at OxPiMpEtte89xO and jus chat wit me for a bit. well gotta go, peace out!
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2003 21:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm about to tear my fucking brains out if you don't fucking finish this fucking story soon! *throws a chair at the wall and starts karate chopping desks and splitting dining utensils in half* ARGH! FUCK IT! *hops around in circles, spitting on the floor* UPDATE ALREADY!
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Reviewed By: Jokilla On: November 26, 2003 04:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
UPDATE THE FUCKING STORY!!!
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Reviewed By: BurningBritelyOne On: November 22, 2003 23:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The idea of Inuyasha being torn between both Kagome and Kikyou, and making Kagome the outsider and Kikyou the popular slut, isn't really that original. However, I think you've made the situation and conditions of the story very creatively. You have some occasionally verb tense and noun gender problems, but overall your writing is very good. I've noticed you've used some foreshadowing and the constant struggles of emotions is so realistic. I really love this story the further and further it gets. I think I figured out who Naraku's oldest daughter is, too, so I'm excited to see how the characters' reactions play out in this. Great job and please update again soon!!
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Reviewed By: Renzokuken [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2003 15:48 CST
Comment/Review:
NOOOO!!PLEASE DON'T DO THIS TO ME! I'M GONNA GO INSANE NOW. PLLLEEEEEAAASSEEE WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER! i'M GONNA DIE! SO UNFAIR. please please please! This is so good. I liek the way the story is going.. Exept for that contract part. Damn inuyasha's nosy father!
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Reviewed By: InusDemoness [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 19:10 CST
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I CANNOT BELIVE YOU DID THAT TO INUYASHA!!!!! HOW COULD YOU HAVE HIM SIGN HIS SOUL AWAY TO THE DEVIL(KIKYOU) ARE YOU TRYING TO GIVE ME A HEART ATTACK!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
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Title: Evil...
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 04:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evil, evil, EVIL!!!! You are SOOO EVIL!!! I stayed up until fucking 4:30 in the morning reading this, having to get up in 3 hours, and you ended it like that! I know you have another chappy coming, but... *sighs, shaking head* Update soon... ...or else... *evil smirk*
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Title: Forking is fun!
Reviewed By: Kibo [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 01:29 CST
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I haven't read through all the chappys, but I just had to make a note on the forking! YAY! Forking is fun! My coworkers and I forked our bosses lawn when she turned 40! She found it funny in the end... haha! Yay! Forking!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 19:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Is Kag older than Kikyo-- cuz if so I think I just found Inu's loophole outta the mess he's dug himself in.
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Reviewed By: nightblossomMorgana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 17:44 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is getting to be too much. ur fic is awsome!! plz update asap. its got to be one of the best fanfics i've read.
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 15:59 CST
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that was a great chap!!!! btw, that was cruel. jus when it looks like inu and kag can b 2gether soon, he goes and digs himself even deeper!!! (really cruel ya kno) anyway, please update soon
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Reviewed By: ForEvaConfused89 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 14:38 CST
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GREAT ff I love it plezzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon I cant wait to c what happens next plezzzzzzzzzz ur driven me crazyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy plezzzzzzzzzzz update soon thanx bye
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Reviewed By: Relix On: November 20, 2003 08:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please finish this soon.. it's so good i can't take it!!! The situation is so tasty.. i wonder how it ends... oh god.. it's so good..
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Reviewed By: Babsie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 07:08 CST
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I I tell you that I hate you for living in that part of the story would you be sad???I don´t think so...You would be laughing of my despair...i´m kidding. :-) I don´t hate you, but I´m really despair...Sesshoumaru have to find something...the bastard Naraku has to be bigamous or something like that.... So pelase, update soon...i don´t beleive my heart can´t take a long wait .
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