| "Star Gazers" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: flygirl 13 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 21:16 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was sooo sweet i really liked it great job
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Reviewed By: DrakeTheDuelist [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2004 19:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hope I wasn't too strict. I really liked this fic, it's just that there are tons of good ones out there. style of writing: 8. It was easy to tell who was who, but I just personally favor script format. That's how I write fanfics personally, so don't take offense. spelling and grammar: 10. I don't pay much attention to spelling and grammar, and I consider myself very forgiving there. originality: 3. You have NO IDEA how many Yohnas I've seen before. C'mon, take a risk and try something new! (I do HaoTam, that's my risk) enjoyment: 9. I like a good Yohna. A lot of the Yohnas that are out are ABSOLUTE CRAP, but this isn't one of 'em. overall rating: 8. I've seen better. Though I've seen way worse. A tip is to make your fics longer and thereby more interesting. That's what works for me. Sorry for being brutal, but we all have something to learn, ne?
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Reviewed By: DemonandGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 16:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Awwww... So sweet!
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Title: touching
Reviewed By: InuSan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 13, 2004 04:01 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
lol... not even a page long and it was already good! too bad it ended! xD
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Title: Awwwww.
Reviewed By: Kyria the fallen angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 14:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Ahhh...sweet love.Painful for Yoh,tho^_~
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Reviewed By: Laura-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2003 11:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was sooooooooo cute! ^^ I really like it!
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