| "Propsal Of A New Beginning" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2006 20:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow ^-^ that was a very cute fic ^-^ I especialy loved the first 3 or 4 "paragraphs" ^-^ Sadly, as most writers do, you've made a few typing errors/punctuation miss-ups. But that hardly detracts from the story at all (unless someone's weird like me and reads an enjoyed story more than once.... once to read it and then once more to catch errors.... ^^; ). I liked this cute story, very fluffy ^^ (and the over all rating of a nine is merely because people cannot do a ten over all i believe... not in these cases because it would be like saying that someone doesn't need to get better ^-^)
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 12:47 CST
Comment/Review:
continue it please? It's sooooo cute. Nother chapter please?????? Do it for Kenshin @_@x Oro?
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Reviewed By: sapphire 1 On: November 10, 2003 00:39 CST
Comment/Review:
i like want another chapter - please
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2003 22:38 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Its cute and sweet, but its second to having a cute little kitten sleeping in your lap while you are on the computer. I swear this kittten is so cute! Great little fic.
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