| "Digimon: Spirit Tamers" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: asdads On: August 19, 2004 14:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Could you plz write a foster's home for imaginary friends story where Mac's older brother rapes francis, the red-headed girl. THX
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Reviewed By: An Idiot On: February 27, 2004 09:39 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope that you'll update this soon. Your intro was pretty good and it wasn't really all that boring. It really helped set the scene for what'll happen or how the story will go.
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Reviewed By: Stalks the Forst On: November 20, 2003 21:28 CST
Comment/Review:
So far this story has caught my intrest. I mean Hikari apears to be with a bad boy, Takato and Juri are going out, and you have even brought in the 4th season. I hope you go more in deepth with the fact Takato and Juri dateing (you know what I mean). It would also be good if you entice apon the relationship with the leader of the 4th season and Z ( I don't know how to spell his name and I may have miss spelled the girl on his teams name). Thats all I can say about your story for now. I hope my sagistins help you. Write sone ;)
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