| "What Immortal Hand" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: flowers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 10:49 CDT
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It's great! Everyone is in Character for the most part. Hell, it kept my attention long enough to get to the 2 chapter, Kudos! (I have a short attention span) The OC doesn't seem TOO Mary Sueish yet, that's really good. Can't wait to keep reading.
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Reviewed By: flowers [MediaMiner Member] On: May 16, 2004 10:22 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is going great so far. I usually don't read a fanfic with OC (for fear of Mary Sue) but vampire stories are a little different for me. I'm only on the first chapter but please, please, don't Mary Sue this character, the plot is good and characters aren't OOC as far as I've read, please don't abandon!
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Reviewed By: Raingoddess On: December 07, 2003 22:38 CST
Comment/Review:
awesome story, can't wait to see more!
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Reviewed By: young_hitomi On: October 22, 2003 17:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
that was good please keep writing more^_^
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Reviewed By: aurorarose237 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 20:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
This looks real good! I can't wait for more!
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