| "We Can Get You Out Debt Free!" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Kenshin_Gotenks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2005 23:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was great, if you ever write another Z/N PLEASE let me know! I love it!
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Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2004 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your story it was great.
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Title: tee!
Reviewed By: nik-o-rama! On: October 16, 2003 19:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ohyeah! You left some of the edits in accidentally...haha! Of course you know I love this story. It's funny as hell. And I can't wait for Gai/Kakashi.
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Title: Pass Go, collect 200
Reviewed By: Rachel the Demon On: October 16, 2003 17:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Read this on your Livejournal, and laughed so hard people thought I had been inhaling paint fumes. Nicely in-character, especially for a Zoro lemon. Ah yes, we all know Virginal!Zoro is so much fun to torture. I might've expected a bit more foreplay from Nami (especially if she's trying to make him beg), but in retrospect it'd be difficult to do if she didn't want to be caught, so it works. My only peeve was the spelling corrections being placed next to the original mistakes. It's a little distracting. Hilarious and slightly twisted little piece here (no pun intended). Enjoyed it muchly.
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