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| "Winter Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 189 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 08, 2005 13:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just...don't get it. There's nothing wrong with the style. I'm not flaming, so please don't take this as a flame. It is well writen, but the plot just doesn't catch me. You kill off Inuyasha, which is overdone, not to mention that if he can be hit by the Wind Scar and having his stomach punch through and live, I doubt he'll die s easily. I understand he was human, but that seems like a last-second detail thrown in to make the death plausible. Also, you don't mention how Sango and Miroku get killed, an odd plothole. Next, the actual story. Why does Kagome love Sess? He raped her, seduced her, demeaned her, made her a slave, beat her, and yet she loves him?!? Where's the well in this story? Also, she turns away from Inuyasha, who loves her back, but oops, too bad Inu! She's in love with a rapist now. Then, he mates Kikyo, and Kagome gets mad? Inu should be the one who's pissed! Oh, and I read about how she forgives Sess because he was willing to die for her. Um, hello Kags! Sess was willing to die, whereas Inu actually did it! I just don't understand how Kagome can think Sess redeams all of his misdeeds with one little act of bravery. Sess kept fighting? Well yeah, he was kinda full-youkai! And Inu was only human, I'm sure is he could have kept fighting, he would have! I just don't understand how Kagome can go from loving a hanyou who died for her to loving a rapist youkai who was willing to. email me at aculp_2@hotmail.com if you want to talk more. maybe you could explain it | Reviewed By: Drake Clawfang On: August 07, 2005 15:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just...don't get it. There's nothing wrong with the style. I'm not flaming, so please don't take this as a flame. It is well writen, but the plot just doesn't catch me. You kill off Inuyasha, which is overdone, not to mention that if he can be hit by the Wind Scar and having his stomach punch through and live, I doubt he'll die s easily. I understand he was human, but that seems like a last-second detail thrown in to make the death plausible. Also, you don't mention how Sango and Miroku get killed, an odd plothole. Next, the actual story. Why does Kagome love Sess? He raped her, seduced her, demeaned her, made her a slave, beat her, and yet she loves him?!? WTF?!?!? That just doesn't get me. Also, she turns away from Inuyasha, who loves her back, but oops, too bad Inu! She's in love with a rapist now. Then, he mates Kikyo, and Kagome gets mad? Inu should be the one who's pissed! Oh, and I read about how she forgives Sess because he was willing to die for her. Um, hello Kags! Sess was willing to die, whereas Inu actually did it! I just don't understand how Kagome can think Sess redeams all of his misdeeds with one little act of bravery. Sess kept fighting? Well yeah, he was kinda full-youkai! And Inu was only human, I'm sure is he could have kept fighting, he would have! I just don't understand how Kagome can go from loving a hanyou who died for her to loving a rapist youkai who was willing to. email me at aculp_2@hotmail.com if you want to talk more. maybe you could explain | Reviewed By: inuyashaz_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2005 10:32 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved it ^_^
| Reviewed By: Inu luvr14 On: June 20, 2005 16:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I love your fanfic. It made me laugh and cry and go through many emothions. Ever think about doing a sequa?
| Title: Winter Hearts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 18:10 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: Makai's Queen On: February 25, 2005 17:29 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i liked this story. pure emotion. really good. ^_^ you know, amyfishigiyugi (probably spelt it wrong) really gets around!! i've read her stuff, seen stuff edited by her and joint projects!! she is one popular author. a really good one at that!! so, if you and her are writing one together, it's gotta be really good!! bye!!! kisskiss MQ
| Title: Winter Hearts
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer On: November 19, 2004 21:12 EST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
| Reviewed By: amoraluv On: October 18, 2004 06:19 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was a nice story to read. your grammer needed work, but other than that it was a great adventure.
| Reviewed By: kana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
ok well i liked the ending alot. if my last review seems weird its because i was trying to change the color. is there going to be a sequal to this story?
| Reviewed By: kana [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2004 16:38 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great story!!!!Font Colorending a lot.
| Reviewed By: fa On: October 07, 2004 00:50 EDT
Comment/Review:
great story but the ending was wayy to happy and sesshoumaru was wayy too ooc in the end
| Reviewed By: angelheart21 On: September 04, 2004 18:29 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this story. You did a great job. It was very sad and yet funny at parts. It was also sweet, at the end any way. I will have to see if you have more stories for me to read! ^_^
| Reviewed By: Ikiwi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 23:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent story! You are truely a great writer! I am a huge Inu/Kag supporter, although I really enjoyed reading about Kagome and Sesshoumaru's relationship for a change. Again, Very good! Too bad it's over...
| Reviewed By: Tsuki Yume On: July 17, 2004 20:38 EDT
Comment/Review:
Well, I actually started reading this on FF.net, but oh well. It's too bad it's over.
| Title: BEST FANFIC EVER!!!!
Reviewed By: demonic_angel666 On: July 15, 2004 15:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved that story it almost made me cry, in some parts.. It kind of made me think of the real inuyasha and how I would think of it when I would see it again. Also it made me realize how great of a writer you are.. Thanks for the story it was terrific. I give it an A+++++ for being the best story I have ever read on mediaminers..
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