| "Intuition" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: AyameLover#? On: November 09, 2004 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Soooo...when are you gonna' write more?......
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Reviewed By: Lily no Anrui On: November 29, 2003 14:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...this fic kicks. I really hope that you write some more. I love the setting and the characterizations. The contrast between Kyo's harshness and Yuki's calm acceptance. Except maybe a bit more background info on how Yuki and Kyo ended up in that situation would be nice. But otherwise, I love it; love the KxY pairing and this is the best one I've read in awhile.
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Reviewed By: Polka Dot On: October 19, 2003 20:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Perspective kinda went back and forth but hey it's a sex fic, so it's not like grammer is gonna get in the way of a good time.
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