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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 14:57 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
My list is fairly long--- but mostly dependent on who shows up in the story. My first guess as to the kidnappers idenity was Naraku-- ya know just cuz, but then I got to thinking, I've read about baby abductions in hospitals and usually it's someone that workes in the hospital. Please don't tell me Kikyo is a nurse. Poor Kagome, she's gonna wake up and be all sad and depressed when she should be estacally happy. But I suppose there's comfort in knowing that your husband is gonna kick the ass of the POS that stole your child from here to all the seven hells and back again. Next chapter please!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 02:31 CST
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So was it Naraku or Kouga? i can't think that Kouga whould do something like that, so my guess is Naraku. He could raise her as his own and then anounce who she is when her loyalties are secured with him. then when she becomes hair to the thrown, Naraku would have a major advantige. That's my guess. keep up the good work and up date soon!!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2003 16:51 CST
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i like a lot the relationship between Inu & Fluffy ...naraku isnt what he seems, is he? write more pls!
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Reviewed By: RavenShadow [MediaMiner Member] On: October 31, 2003 00:38 CST
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This is a really good story, I hope you update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 19:36 CST
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Smells like the beginings of another great story. Loved the part about InuYasha wanting to kill them himself, definatly in character. And I wonder what it is Shippo does best. This is new for me I usually don't read stories that deal with the Inu gang's offspring but I like your writing so I'll give it a go.
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Reviewed By: meera [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 15:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
who stole their baby??? this is an amazing fic so far. update!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 01:48 CST
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mm, please continue. i think i'm hooked now. up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 22:16 CST
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Cmon, cmon, cmon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! pls come back soon!! this fic is so good so far!!
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Reviewed By: Step of Faith [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please please please update update update
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*sniffs* I feel so bad for them!! That abductor is gonna get their ass kicked to the seven hells and back. I wonder though who did it. I mean I have a list of potential suspects in my head, but I guess I'm just gonna have to wait and see. UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 01:30 CST
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well thats a mean place to leave us. o.O ga! up date son please! and keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: silver talons [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2003 21:18 CDT
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I love it omg! It is so awesome I can't believe it you must write more soon! Yasha is a full demon right? cause if he isn't then Takara is 1/4 demon. Oh and does her name mean anything or did you make it up? Anyway good luck with the story and I can't wait for an update! ja
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 02:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love where this could possibly go. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: katierose On: October 17, 2003 23:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good i like i also want to know where sango and shippo just wandering but it is really great i like it
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2003 15:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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wow...nice beginning for your story, and it really sucks to be Inuyasha right now. hope he makes the abductors life painful. good luck with the rest.
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