| "Code Pink" Reviews/Comments [ 50 ] |
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Reviewed By: erinlin On: December 06, 2003 09:42 CST
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OMG! finish it! this is great!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good please update as soon as possible i love it.
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Title: HOLY DOODLES!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Battousais gal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 06:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ARHHHHH!!!!!!!! DON'T LET SHIPPOU DIE!!!!!! pwease? As soon as I finished reading that first paragraph I knew the two people who took Takara. At first(begining of the story) I thought it would be Kikyo(arh! I can't spell today) GREAT JOB!!!! Please update soon!!! Again, there was the little thing with the spaces in between the names, but I have an inkling that it was MediaMiner, so I won't bother doing anything to the spelling rating.
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 11:37 CST
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wow...wouldnt have thought of Hojo, although Kikyo should have been just a bit obvious a choice to make, oh well. Good chapter, although it might have been just a bit longer. oh well, good luck with the rest.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2003 01:17 CST
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oh no. i hope shippo is ok. and hojo! wow. i hadn't even thought of him! shame on me. good twist. up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Title: My fanfic name is chihiro-san
Reviewed By: shishy [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
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Sorry, but this chap. was a little...um...dark. And kinda raunchy. I loved it though. SHIPPO CAN'T DIE! Noooooooo!!!!! He can't. I won't let you kill him. He's to foxy to die (no pun intended). I can't let you kill him off. That was an amazing description of him rescuing Takara (did I spell it right?). Unfortunantly, it was a little too well described and I had to run to the bathroom for a sec. Blood makes me queasy. FYI. Oh, and my writer name is chihiro-san. just another FYI. haha Toodles!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2003 13:55 CST
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Ok in my first review I kinda guessed Kikyo-- and ironically the latest suspect I added to my list was Hojo. I mean Naraku is too obvious, Kouga's not that stupid so the only other guess is someone who adores Kagome-- ie Hojo. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: shishy On: November 24, 2003 22:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is amazing. You have quite a talent for writing and especially plot developement. Good use of discription and flashback. And, I must say, you have thought up quite an original idea. I can deftly tell you (as I have grown up with authors, and am one) that you have great potential and should act on it, if you haven't already done so. *beaming*
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2003 02:11 CST
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Oh, poor Kagome. Poor Inu Yasha. That first flashback was so sweet. Is Kagome a Miko? or did you say that and I just missed it. How did she know he was there? good chapter! up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 20, 2003 16:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually my brother caught my sister and told my dad, who told my mom who gounded my sister for 6 months and canceled her birthday party. Poor Kag...I've got another suspect added to the list, maybe 2. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ashra Ab [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 18:58 CST
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i love the way you're writing the fic between present time and flashbacks! pls write more soon!!
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2003 05:07 CST
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*sigh* when is Kagome going to wake up? though I love the flashbacks. I got the kidnapping idea from another fic i read several years ago on another topic, so credit sadly can't go to my brain alone. also i was wondering if Kikyo was going to make an apearence (or did she already and i just forget)? nehoo, up date soon and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Precious [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 22:20 CST
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So that's what Shippo does best. Neat! I especailly like when you make Shippo disappear and leave or enter a room. You ened the chapter with a flash back. No fair! Don't worry I'll get over it. I like how you are telling us the story but also the past/how the characters got where they are now. Keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming.
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Reviewed By: applejacks [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 19:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I figured Naraku isn't behind this-- too obvious, and where's the fun in that! I suppose Shippo's special talent is all things sneaky and underhanded, good man to have on one's team. So, when do we hear from the upset mother? I remember when my sister tried to sell me at the age of 4-- LONG story-- and if Kag's reaction is anything like my mom's was, everyone look out and take cover. Update soon!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 15:25 CST
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interesting that you have naraku as a good guy. True, he might just be playing a game, but still. I think that i will hold off on any guesses, since my last guessing game didn't go so well(if you're curious try reading woodin cylinders and red herrings). although i am curious about what it is that shippou does, searching for hints on the streets? good luck with the rest
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