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Reviewed By: ArtemisMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2005 18:23 CST
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This was a cute story! ^_^ It was a bit rough, but it's also one of your eariler ones so I'm sure you've improved since then. But I really did enjoy reading it and just getting a good dose of some action and cuteness (I was so caught up in the part with Shippo near the end that I read past the end of my lunch break, LOL). I'll have to check out some of your more recent work now...
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Title: Special Notice* * * *
Reviewed By: Rumiko Takahashi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2004 21:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once again, you never stop to amaze me. I love your stories. Plus it seems that you know my friend Squeakyinuears from Fanfiction.net. If she's also reviewing that would mean you have great taste in detail and creative ideas. Since, she only reads and reviews the ones that she thinks is great in her opinion. So, keep up the great work. Plus I might think of having my grandmother make a movie of one of your stories. Keep writing. Later.
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Reviewed By: ang3lic_pl4ya(not logged on) On: April 24, 2004 14:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE YOUR FIC!!! i love all your other fics too! [the ones i read]
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Title: this wuz fabulous!
Reviewed By: lilsweeteekitty On: January 13, 2004 22:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a vry original fic......!!!!!!!!!! great job....keep up the good wrk!!!!!!
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Title: great!!
Reviewed By: brat2princess On: January 09, 2004 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg i loved this fic it was great!!!!!!
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Title: *sniff*
Reviewed By: erinlin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2004 15:45 CST
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It's over. *sad face* the last chapter tied everything together perfectly, though. the flashbacks were pure genius! maby you're next fic could be Sessy and Rin, and how there relationship worked out? 'casue that was so original. keep writing (something else) *high five*
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2004 17:24 CST
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That will do for an end, That last chapter just seemed to leave off without giving a true ending like this one did. although, I just have this natural curiosity of what happened to Hojo's men. I can imagine some stuff that might have happened, but I was just curious what you might choose to do to them. oh well, this end the story well enough. have fun and good luck with any future endeavors.
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2004 19:39 CST
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^_^ i think that for the first time i actually don't feel like totaly obliterating Kikyo. i mean i'm made at her and i will always hate her but for the first time it didn't feel like she was the compleat instagatior of the whole thing and really there along for the ride because she simply looked like Kag. wow. congradualtions. you have somewhat calmed my blood lust. ^_^ thanks for the epologue. up date your other stories please and keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san (too lazy to log in) On: January 04, 2004 13:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Thank you for the epiloug; it was an unnecissary (yet not unwelcomed) surprise! It was just as well written as the rest of your story. I must say that the fanfic ended at a good time, but isn't it hard to end them? I have such a hard time drawing mine to a close, because I wish that they would go on forever (and I wish I had enough writing talent to continue them forever!). Well, that's all I wish to say. Now I must be off to dispose of the puppy in my lap who's life goal it is to interrupt my typing and to breathe in my face. Ulk. Her breath smells like fermented chum. *shudder*
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Reviewed By: deamon girl 101 On: January 01, 2004 00:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more about this fanfic
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Reviewed By: Naomi_Ikahen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 03:16 CST
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Is that the end? Really? I want to see Kikyo get killed... Nobody woulda guessed it was Hojo. I narrowed it down to three suspects in the first chapter. Kikyo, Naraku, and Kouga. Then two in the next. Kikyo and Kouga. And when I was reading the chapter when the two culprits were revealed. I thought by the first few sentences that it was Kouga and I was practically basking in my glory at getting it right and there, it hit me as I read further. Who woulda ever thought 'young, innocent' Hojo would kidnap Inu and Kag's daughter and dare murder it? Really...
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Title: UPDATEZ UR STORIEZ DA BOMBZ
Reviewed By: XO_ROMEO On: December 13, 2003 20:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i likez da storiez uz a greatz authoroz pleaz updatez ur storiez da bombz
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Reviewed By: Lil'Inu [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2003 21:28 CST
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such a nice neutral ending to this chapter. i thank you for not furthering my stress level. ^_^ up date soon and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:30 CST
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wait-just-a-cotton-pickin-minute! Are you done? Honestly? I don't know...I-it-huh-fuh- It's laaaateeee! I'm tired and confused! *whine*whine* heeellllpppp!
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Reviewed By: chihiro-san [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2003 20:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice. Delightfully simple with enough twists and turns to satisfy any reader. *exit author, enter reader-teen* ARE YOU SERIOUS?! That's the last chapter?! NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!! grrrr...... ah well. I can't FORCE you to write more; it's your decision. *exit reader-teen, enter author* sorry about that. This was a wonderful fanfic and I lament the ending of it. It was wonderful.
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