| "What Might Have Been" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: wow......
Reviewed By: Aria Lerendeair [MediaMiner Member] On: May 07, 2004 13:52 CDT
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I don't give ratings until the fic is done. I want you to know something. I have read hundreds of thousands of GW fics and to this date only four have made me cry. First was a heartbreaking 6x3 written by an unknown author that I was never able to find again. Second was an entire arc written by a person named Enigma. Third was my own deathfic that I have just recently posted and the fourth was your story. Very few fics can touch me like yours has. It is very hard to make these characters seem real sometimes, but you have succeeded brilliantly. I feel like their pain is mine and that I can relate to them easily. I think the 1x2x5 is a good idea, but I hope Fei doesn't get too hurt in the process, I love him to death and he lives in my head and the final bit of angst at the end had tears streamning down my cheeks. Please write again soon, I think I might die if you don't. I am a sucker for happy endings, but I'm wondering if this story could really be one of those happily ever afters that I love so much. I will be looking daily for your updates. Love ya, Aria Lerendeair
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Reviewed By: Sesshoumarustruluv [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2004 15:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you have a great story going on here. I'm really enjoying it. I hope to read another chapter soon. Keep up the great work!!
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Reviewed By: M.C. On: November 06, 2003 22:37 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know about that first one. It seems like it would work, but I would rather have Zechs and Heero together. Inculding a whole mountian of sap to go with it. 1x6... *drool* Love that pairing!
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Reviewed By: Mashiro Karasu On: November 06, 2003 17:15 CST
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I think this should end as a 1x2x5. Wufei I believe would welcome Heero in order for them all to be happy
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 23:46 CST
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHHHHHHHHH! That still dosen't answer much! Oh wait... it kinda does.
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 23:30 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
AHHHHHH! What happened? Did Heero move on? Did he kill himself? Does Duo truly love Wufei and not just with him to honor his promise? What happened to keep Heero away for eight years? So many questions, no answers, driving me mad...
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Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 18, 2003 15:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh! That was just so sad. Wufei, Dou and Heero suffering. I don't know if I want you to continue. Well if you do, is there a way that Wufei and Heero can love Dou at the same time? Make it a threesome so neither of them suffer or leave it the way it is. For a one-shot fic, it was great, full of emotions and bitter-sweet ending. Keep up the *good* job.
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