| "Just Be Yourself" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: DarknessAngel.com On: January 06, 2004 13:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed your story, humor fanfics are so much fun to read. You could work on the details of your story a little,but it was still good and understandable. KEEP WRITING!!!! P.S Nuriko seems a little wimpy in your story and I am really a Nuriko fan. Plus fanfics are better if the character in a is closest to the character in the anime. It makes it a little hard to write but the story will be better
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Reviewed By: Sailor Megan On: December 23, 2003 17:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
just to say I thought it was great because I am a VERY BIG FAN OF HARUKA.I know a lot about her and all of the other characters from sailor moon. So I just thought it was so funny that Michiru was teaching Haruka how to be a lady.I have sailor moon viedos that have Haruka in it and I can't see her wear a dress or evenything that is girlyish.Please right another one it was so funny!!!!
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Reviewed By: nsilent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2003 23:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the first time I've read a story that is Haruka/Nuriko. I was thinking that Usagi's and Miaka's plan backfire on themselves when Haruka and Nuriko date, BUT with Haruka as the male and Nuriko as the female. I wonder how their friends will react...
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Reviewed By: Mskate [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2003 16:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, you need to flesh out the description a bit. It's nice, but too choppy. As well as the people, we need to know what kind of shop they're in. What are the walls like? Is it nostalgic, Or Uber-modern? Also, I don't think the premise is very good. Besides Nuriko's crossdressing, there's the issue of his bisexuality, which is not a phase. And the fact that Alex is GAY. In other words, a Lesbian. Canonically, and properly.
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