| "Gen-Ex" Reviews/Comments [ 11 ] |
Reviewed By: ai_neko_tenchi (^_~) On: July 05, 2004 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story EVER!! i compleatly understand every thing (thats rare concidering the fact im none too bright)everything about this story rock! and its compleatly original! Signed: Ai_Neko_Tenchi ^_~
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Reviewed By: stesnus [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2004 13:26 CDT
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this story is great! PLEASE update soon!
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Reviewed By: Ivy Adrena On: June 07, 2004 19:37 CDT
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I disliked the way Kiao was treating InuYasha, but I got the feeling that he thought it was the only way he could get through to him. Still, I think he didn't have to be so harsh about it. Pssst... when're you going to update Adventures in Sunnydale? *prods* ivy_adrena@hotmail.com
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Title: Gen-Ex
Reviewed By: SakuraHakashi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 16:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your style of writing, it gives it sort of creativity. Some words you misspell but it is easy to tell what you are trying to say. The originality/Creativity is great, you should become a writer to a animation story yourself if you're not yet. I don't know why but I find the story funny, i like the expressions and things you put IY to say. Overall Rating I gave a 10, no part of this story is boring. It's exciting and i believe it makes people wonder what will happen next(like me).
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2004 23:22 CST
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congrats on graduating. good story, but im just a bit curious about what the storyline is. you seem to be doing a good job with the characters though, so please continue writing. have fun
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani (TT) On: November 10, 2003 06:36 CST
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Awwww...*strokes puppy's head* I'll feed your need, Inuyasha...
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Reviewed By: Tsukitani [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:08 CST
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*groans in disappointment* I can't believe you're going to leave it there! Have some pity on we poor readers, starved for excellent, original stories like this one. Ooh, I am so going to tell my friends about this one...so if you don't update soon, you're going down. *grin*
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Reviewed By: flame81 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 15:13 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the story.. it is an interesting idea, althought it looked like you just took Inus Youkai heritage out of consense by making it a scientific (therefore modern/urban) origin. It should deepen his conflict about his belonging, because he now really is the only one of his breed. The last chappy was the best so far. I hope you won't get to far in the scientific part of the story, because, well I am biochemistry student and I have to crinch everytime I read about the ideas some people seems to get about genetic engineering.. ^_^
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 11:49 CST
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first chapter good, second chapter was okay, and the third chapter was AWESOME. very nice addition, although i am a bit curious about why inuyasha would just sit there, unless he hasn't had too much contact with people. i think thats all, good luck with the rest! and i hope you have fun writing this story
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Reviewed By: the-fan= On: October 24, 2003 22:34 CDT
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give me more!!
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Reviewed By: cursed_jax [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2003 17:36 CDT
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this seems to be a good fanfic so far, hope you will finish it. you seem to be a good author from what i read in wcrh.
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