| "Unforgivable Sins" Reviews/Comments [ 13 ] |
Title: Unforgivable Sins
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: February 01, 2006 12:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Unforgivable Sins
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2005 23:28 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: BloodAngel15 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2004 13:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
update update update update. please i want to know whats going to happen next it was getting good and then you sorta just left it like that. ::Tears:: wagggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...sniffle...please update...sniffle..soon. Ja Ne
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Title: Great start
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2004 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great start to a fic. Update soon. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: November 30, 2003 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
*Running around in circles*Plz update soon K. I can't wait any longer *Big Puppy dog eyes* PLLLEEAAASSEE
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Reviewed By: Cresent Moon 22000 On: November 14, 2003 19:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OH COME ON PLz UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: Cymarel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2003 23:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
review?! I want to read more before I review!!!! well I like the start! seems very good. and iof course...Sessh/Kag? any better no!!!! i look forward to reading more!!! i need MORE!!!! write write write!!! (and I agree with other peoples...longer chappies!)
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Reviewed By: Inu Girl On: November 09, 2003 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVE IT MORE MORE MMMOOOORRRREEEE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Cresent moon 22000 On: November 01, 2003 14:41 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
THIS REALLY REALLT GOOOOOOOOD PLZ UPDATE SOOOOOOON K
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Reviewed By: Jaxxia7(too lazy to log in) On: October 22, 2003 13:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good start but it might help the story if you made the chapters a little longer. If this was like a prologue then it would be okay. Other than that you've got a pretty good idea but don't let Kag loose that forceful demeanor. I like it. Update soon! Ja ne! Jaxxa7
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Reviewed By: Sesshi and Youko lover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 18:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it update soon!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Blue cresent moon On: October 20, 2003 16:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is really good Fic keep it up
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Reviewed By: Helen On: October 20, 2003 03:05 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hmmm. Ne please do not interpret this as a flame because it's not. I mearly want give you a few pointers. One, make your chapters longer. Two, elaborate more one who is chasing Kagome and why. This will give other readers a better insight in what is happening. Other than that, you're off to a good start. So, keep on writing.
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