| "F^3 Hellsing" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Vampire Master
Reviewed By: Damnarious On: September 11, 2004 21:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
A. This is one of the best ficts I've ever read B. u dont suck.. if anything the shit i wright sucks.. C. i like the way vampiress sounds to
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Reviewed By: Nornwolfe On: August 19, 2004 03:09 CDT
Comment/Review:
Fic isn't bad, I did read the the whole thing. Do you think you could do a Heinkel/Yumiko pairing?
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Reviewed By: F00! On: August 14, 2004 07:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great fic. You dont see much of CxI Out there, its more AxI or AxC. And I love this pairing and the fact that you never had them say 'I love you'.
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Reviewed By: Trigun_2663 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2004 03:59 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good that was the best that i have ever seen and you should write more if there is more that is because i just love I/C or C/I storys
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Title: Delicious
Reviewed By: Shi-koi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2004 10:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
. ::waggles fingers:: You bad, bad person you. You made me spend all my free time reading this. I simply couldn't bear to tear myself away. . That has to be the best written IxS lemon fics I have EVER come across. . God! I don't have the words to describe how enjoyable this was. . Wonderful. Absolutely wonderful. . I don't think I'd ever dare to write something like this. Where you have style I don't think I could find any of the right words. . Such a yummy treat. . Hugs, . ~Shi-koi~ .
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Reviewed By: a passerby On: November 24, 2003 13:31 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actually, I've just been involved in a discussion on the differences between slash and porn. The first one's character interaction. I'm not sure you were completely in-character with Integra's letting go; while it may complement her character to want to let someone else take charge, I didn't see a lot of trust built up between herself and Seras that would explain why she picked Seras. Another thing that may blur the lines between erotic fiction and smut is word choice. Would Integra really refer to a "mound of Venus" or a "tit?" I can't see that; she's much too polished. "Clit" is another one. It's too slang-y to really fit into a Hellsing love scene. Hopefully, that will help clarify what you want to write in your own mind.
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Reviewed By: Descendant [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this, I love Seras/Integra fics! And this one was real hot!
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Reviewed By: me On: October 28, 2003 21:09 CST
Comment/Review:
that was good, I liked how you put the scene from the manga in there. nice job...
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Reviewed By: Ministry Agent On: October 22, 2003 03:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 4 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
You a bad, bad person, Bsmart! In all honesty, the idea's okay, simply let down by rampaging Americanization (sic) and some truly godawful dialogue. Why not put 'I love you' in there when you've got some true XXX Pr0n dialogue in there? ^_~ Ah, well. It's better than most lemons, but it's still got some way to go yet before it's able... y'know. Erm. I'm more interested in "The Youngest Hakubi" really. Now that's a GOOD fic!
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