| "Hopping time lines" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] |
Reviewed By: willowsnap [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story. I hope you will come out with another chapter in the near future. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: pdgmoyn On: March 21, 2005 03:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I actually really like the ff but the plot is not very creativ in my opinion, I could foresee many things. Other than that I really enjoyed reading it and I'm some of the people who still look if you've updated at least, once every month? XD
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Reviewed By: doragon41 On: September 29, 2004 21:50 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love your story. please let pan stay with vegeta on vegetasi they are soo cute together. and err oh yeah make that imposter dad DIE!!! *cough* and maybe a lemon??*cough* love the story!!!
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Reviewed By: frozen_in_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2004 14:21 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeease update soon.... lol, i really like the story! it's reeeeeeeeally cool!
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Title: hopping time lines
Reviewed By: mlf On: July 18, 2004 13:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
huuuuuuuuuuuurrrray you updated thanks....i hope that they keep on getting closer.and i can't wait to read what they are going to do with vegeta's (DAD)so please up date soon.maria
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Title: COME ON
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: July 15, 2004 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on go wif it im eager 2 know r u abandonin this fic coz if u do ill.......... ill wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *crys runing off like a baby*
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Title: COME ON
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: July 15, 2004 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on go wif it im eager 2 know r u abandonin this fic coz if u do ill.......... ill wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *crys runing off like a baby*
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Title: COME ON
Reviewed By: DBZ MANIAC On: July 15, 2004 05:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
come on go wif it im eager 2 know r u abandonin this fic coz if u do ill.......... ill wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh *crys runing off like a baby*
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Title: hopping time lines
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2004 17:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh great story...man i really like vegeta and pan stories alot..please update soon......maria
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Title: Very Good
Reviewed By: AnimeALLday [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2003 18:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!That was great!cant wait to read more!
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