| "Golden Amber Diaries" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 07:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Me again, you've got some formatting problems with chapter 3. It looks like the first word or two of each and every line has been lopped off.
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Title: Dark Lord of Diaries
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2003 07:09 CST
Comment/Review:
One minor thing about Chapter 2. The normal Adult level V-Dramon doesn't have wings.
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Title: Dark Lord of Diaries
Reviewed By: Canis Black [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 19:45 CST
Comment/Review:
Chapter 2 appears to be a chapter from another fic, and not the second entry of Golden Amber Diaries. Just thought you might like to know.
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