| "Breathless Hearts" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: just needing to tell you...HURRY UP AND UPDATE PLEASE!
Reviewed By: Yoru Fallen Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 03:32 CST
Comment/Review:
hello i have noticed that it's been about 9 months since you last updated...so i just thought that i needed to give you an e-xtra boost of confidence. so yeah, love the story please update soon!!!
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Title: get on with it
Reviewed By: Tredars, mate, Tredars On: April 08, 2004 22:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
C'mon, get on with it. It's going to be pretty boring until you actually start writing/typing about Riku dammit. other than that it was ok.
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Reviewed By: nightingail of the forest On: January 25, 2004 20:43 CST
Comment/Review:
come on i have been waiting for the next chapter for a while
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Reviewed By: Lover of Riku On: November 30, 2003 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry but I didnt really understand it. Is there an ending? Maybe I missed a button or something that said how to go to the next page. Its good though.. I love how you made it so that it is a log.
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Title: woo
Reviewed By: mistressofdeath [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2003 17:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow, I'm a loser, I'm reviewing my own fic... I feel cool... oh well...
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