| "Loves Sense of Humor" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Love Sense Of Humor
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2006 01:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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Title: Love Sense Of Humor
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2005 23:00 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: Great story
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2004 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great! Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: shirahime [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2004 23:15 CST
Comment/Review:
Your story flows nicely and i like the balance it has. it was a little hard to read the first chapters because of the run ons, typos and cut off lines. but hey! it is the content that counts and it is top notch! i cant wait to see what happens next... update soon please!
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Reviewed By: InuKitsuneMiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 22:57 CST
Comment/Review:
wow kule i want more lemon jk no really i love ur story it's kule more please!~!
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2003 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was really good cant wait till you update again.
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Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 12:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Hakamas are also wormn by males, and if she was wearing a kimono, which is a long dress, she wouldn't be wearing hakama pants. Hakama pants are normally worn by swordsmen to conceal the movement of their feet as not to reveal the direction of their next attack to their opponent.
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Reviewed By: InuYashu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 12:23 CST
Comment/Review:
A haori is the male version of a kimono, and therfore Kagome wouldn't be wearing it. She could either be wearing a kimono or a yukata (light, summer kimono). Please write more, the story is awsome and I could use it for a little help on my own book, about demons.
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Title: Spiff
Reviewed By: wrathchylde [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, I'm enjoying your story thus far. I just wonder if you're cutting and pasting for notepad or some such because when I read it it seems to be omitting at least one word per line. If it's just me, oops but if not here's a head's up for you. Keep up the good work and I'm looking forward to more.
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