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Title: Poor Updates so sad T-T
Reviewed By: Stormy Nights Rainy Days [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 17:03 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hmmmm hey its march already don't you start your sports? That means soon there will be Updates? I do Martial Arts that works for me. It helps me think. But I don't start until summer T-T I know how you feel.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 03:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this is a cute story. For ideas on the story... Probably you should have the first day of work be really bad for her. I noticed that they still didn't tell her what to do. You could set it up so that they still don't tell her thinking she could do it anyway. Have her frazzle out and Sess go in there chew her out. Then she blows up at him or something like that. Another thing to do is if you bring in the floating soul that arrived that night. Bring it into focus or something. Also another idea one word KOGA. Since this is a Sess/Kag fic it will bring out the jealousy in Sess. But of course Ah or Un could do that too. And if those youkai are around what is to say there aren't others who aren't necessarily on good terms with Sess. You could also bring in the Shikon no Tama. You didn't mention it or where it could be. Also if it still exists youkai will still go after it. Though probably in a more refined or less noticable way. Well that is all I can come up with. I hope you update it looks like it can be a really good story.
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Title: Dah88
Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 15:42 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Plz update soon i love this story and i want to read what going to happen next plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: NIGHTINGAIL OF THE FOREST On: January 26, 2004 18:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TOTALLY AWSOME! that was a cool fic! please update
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Title: GREAT
Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 00:13 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i was lookin forward to this update since your last one.....i've checked everyday ^_^
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
like the fanfic update soon
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Title: paige89
Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG i totally forgot about this fic!!! ::hits head against desk:: than i started thinkin 'bout it like a week ago. today i got an email from mediaminer telling me u updated........then i read it, and im like OMG i remember this!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY! keep updating, i love it!
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (ish lazi dunt wanna sign in) On: December 27, 2003 13:04 CST
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^^ LOL
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: December 27, 2003 12:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
u have to update really really really soon polease this story is awsome and it's really really really great
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 18:24 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn, you really need to get the next chap out soon... i was disappointed when i had to stop. I'm really loving this fic
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Title: lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2003 17:21 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good job! but ya already now that huh? hehe-ne wayz, just had ta review newayz, cuz this was good! i LOOOOVE this fic soooo much, and i want to thank you for letting me be your BETA reader! Thanks SOOO much! Can't wait for your next chapter okayz! -Lani
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 23:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! good chappie! i like that ppl care about kagome!!! yuppz! hehe! glad kagome is feeling good now! well today or their today! okee, enof rambling! lol, good job! yuppers! very creative! yup! (i like to say yup!) ne way, wen u say editor, do ya mean beta reader? cause i could help ya out if ya want! that i can! yuppers...usually thursday is the best day if ya want...dont got no fucking drama club then thats y...well, not now ne wayz...eep! well, if ya like, im still free, but it will take a lil while is all, i will do my best if ur interested! enof rambling! lol, good job! update soon! -Lani
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Reviewed By: Kilea859 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this looks like it could turn out as one hell of a fic...or it could fade away from exsistence because you wont update it. i am hopeing that it is the first choice. plz update soon! ^^
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 17:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hiyee! very good job! yup yup yup! ppor Gome. College must b tuff! o.O make me not wanna go! ... well, i got a question...umm...that part where sessh walks by, ok 1) was he refering to kikyo? the dark miko? and 2) that was KAgome? like was it a whilr back when sessh was walking? Thanks again! great chapter! -Lani
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Title: Lo
Reviewed By: Slywolf9 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 18:45 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, i liked it! i thought it was very good! yup yup yup! damn! im still a little unclear on what happened to inua\yasha..did he puposly go to Hell with the dead bitch? hn....damn selfish hanyou! er...poof Fluffy! wish i could go over there and make him feel all better....i wish i could make kagome feel better too! sigh, good job! cant wait for the next update! -Lani
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