"Memoirs of a Soul" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: Meems On: October 02, 2004 14:47 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this have to be the first sess/kag fic i ever read! (i'm just afraid of reading about inuyasha and kagome NOT being together, i guess^^) liked it very much! it's different, and the plot is very intriguing... i haven't seen the last episodes of inuyasha, so i don't know whether this fic is based on the ending or not... oh well, guess i'll find out sooner or later! keep up the good work, ya hear!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: September 22, 2004 23:34 CDT Comment/Review: Cools new chapter. So why did Hyouga send her out to do janitorial work? So sadistic he is. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: charmed142 On: September 22, 2004 22:43 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: ohhhhhh!!!!!! please hurry with the next chap. i really really really like this story and i can't wait for the next one, so........... please hurry!
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Reviewed By: YASMIN On: September 21, 2004 14:36 CDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOVE THIS FIC I CAN TBELIVE U GO SO LITTLE REVIEWS, SUXXXXX ! ANYAYWAZZ IVE BEEN WAITING A LONG TIME FOR THE UPDATE . CANT WAIT TILL TH ENEXT CHAPPY ! U SHOULD LET KAGOME GIVE HIM A PIECEOF HER MIND!!!!
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Title: chapter 8 Reviewed By: kikitravel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 21, 2004 12:20 CDT Comment/Review: Chapter 8
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Title: Poor Updates so sad T-T Reviewed By: Stormy Nights Rainy Days [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2004 17:03 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hmmmm hey its march already don't you start your sports? That means soon there will be Updates? I do Martial Arts that works for me. It helps me think. But I don't start until summer T-T I know how you feel.
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 03:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I think this is a cute story. For ideas on the story... Probably you should have the first day of work be really bad for her. I noticed that they still didn't tell her what to do. You could set it up so that they still don't tell her thinking she could do it anyway. Have her frazzle out and Sess go in there chew her out. Then she blows up at him or something like that. Another thing to do is if you bring in the floating soul that arrived that night. Bring it into focus or something. Also another idea one word KOGA. Since this is a Sess/Kag fic it will bring out the jealousy in Sess. But of course Ah or Un could do that too. And if those youkai are around what is to say there aren't others who aren't necessarily on good terms with Sess. You could also bring in the Shikon no Tama. You didn't mention it or where it could be. Also if it still exists youkai will still go after it. Though probably in a more refined or less noticable way. Well that is all I can come up with. I hope you update it looks like it can be a really good story.
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Title: Dah88 Reviewed By: Dah88 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 15:42 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Plz update soon i love this story and i want to read what going to happen next plz update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: NIGHTINGAIL OF THE FOREST On: January 26, 2004 18:07 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: TOTALLY AWSOME! that was a cool fic! please update
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Title: GREAT Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 06, 2004 00:13 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: i was lookin forward to this update since your last one.....i've checked everyday ^_^
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Reviewed By: 12blue12 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2004 19:48 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: like the fanfic update soon
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Title: paige89 Reviewed By: Paige89 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2003 23:01 CST Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: OMG i totally forgot about this fic!!! ::hits head against desk:: than i started thinkin 'bout it like a week ago. today i got an email from mediaminer telling me u updated........then i read it, and im like OMG i remember this!!!!!!!!!!!!! YAY! keep updating, i love it!
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (ish lazi dunt wanna sign in) On: December 27, 2003 13:04 CST Comment/Review: ^^ LOL
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Reviewed By: cutie_pie_2101_1012(not signed in) On: December 27, 2003 12:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: u have to update really really really soon polease this story is awsome and it's really really really great
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Reviewed By: Sesshiria [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2003 18:24 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: damn, you really need to get the next chap out soon... i was disappointed when i had to stop. I'm really loving this fic
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