| "Blood and Sight" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Title: Inuyasha lover
Reviewed By: Inuyasha_For_Ever [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2003 21:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I bet it was Inuyasha's blood or his riencarnation. OHH I have to know what happens next. Don't do this to your new loyal doggie girl *Transforms into huge black dog with white moon and star on head* woff woff *Does doggie eyes to convince you*
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Title: Princess Diana Robbin Moore
Reviewed By: Robbih-Moore (I wrote an Inu-yasha story) On: November 10, 2003 22:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are some parts of the story that were confusingto follow, like the reason behind Kagome changing. there needs to be more exsplaination behind it. Could use a spell checking, knew is some places should have been new and know should have been now, needs SPELL CHECKING. other than that I enjoyed it and would like to see the rest of the trilogy your newest fan Robbih-Moore
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Reviewed By: SleepySango [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2003 00:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
I like this fic. It's got a couple little grammatical errors, and the random author's notes in the middle of the story interrupts the flow, but it's okay, for your standard Kagome-turns-hanyou fic. Not that there's anything wrong with this cliche, it can be cute if done well, but you've got a lot of competition that has done the exact same thing. I would recommend longer chapters. That didn't feel like a one-shot, either. Too short, and no sense of closure at the end. It read like a chapter. Also, it's really annoying when authors demand reviews. Usually I refuse to review on principle. Why? Because you should write something for your personal desire for creation, not because you want compliments from some of half-illiterate reviewers at FF.N. The fic could use some work, but it's not as bad as many I've seen. This isn't a flame. It's called constructive criticism. I'd print what you have out, take out a big red pen, and proofread. Edit. Maybe add some. I know too many English majors... *sigh* I'm a Japanese major and German minor myself. A bit of a grammar nazi, actually. I can't stand misspelled words in fics.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
I liked it. I think you should continue the set. I'm not going to force you to or anything, but... Ja Ne
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Reviewed By: FireFaer On: October 24, 2003 17:32 CDT
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This fic is too cool. Whose blood did she get? Could it have been Sessoumaru's? Is it anyone we know from the IY series? Please post the other parts of the trilogy. G2g TTFN ^_^
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Reviewed By: waterrain [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 16:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please please contiune on with the story?! It is so good that your other ones will be good to!
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Reviewed By: Stormsangel On: October 24, 2003 13:05 CDT
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I loved your story! please please contiune on with the story, it was so good. im sure that if you do contiune with the story it will be just as good.
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