| "Anniversary" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Novalda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2003 13:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this fiction so far - especially the Tatsumi and Tsuzuki angle, but can\'t Tatsumi be frustrating? I really hope you find away to get the guy to confess his true feelings for Tsuzuki - we all know they\'re there. Great job, and I\'m looking forward muchly to updates!
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Title: Sad, but lovely
Reviewed By: paxnirvana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2003 02:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ouch, tough subject, my dear. But beautifully and respectfully handled, with a good dose of Tsuzuki's seemingly endless self-doubt and angst as well. And Tatsumi... *heavy sigh* Does he ever need a smack upside the head. *shakes head* Poor, patient, loving Watari. I like this very much! *grin*
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Reviewed By: halowing4 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a great start to a story. Using the bombing of Nagasaki and its effects on the shinigami is original yet totally plausible with the series. I hope you find someway to get Tsuzuki and Tatsumi together. Can't wait for an update!
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