| "Freedom In Exile" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Mordre [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2006 15:57 CST
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Egads! Although I have the game Exile at home on my computer, it has been at least 8 years since I played it! I should do so again. *is tempted*
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Title: language
Reviewed By: yuki_maxwell On: March 06, 2004 22:41 CST
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the language is al bhed. translation, E-Ed rindc! Ufff! Sygaed cutup! = It hurts! owww. make it stop! and.. nyammo (really?) mail me at yukimaxwell@hotmail.com
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: February 04, 2004 07:59 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story. It is one of the better one's that I read.
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Reviewed By: Xen-Oh On: January 14, 2004 01:50 CST
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I like it has lots of potential. I think the perfect characters to be in this is Alucard from Hellsing and Aya Brea from Parasite eve.
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Reviewed By: woof On: January 13, 2004 07:02 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I like to say that this is getting intresting. that's more or les what I like to say. although I would like to see Hinata-chan in the fic, I can understand that you can't do her character I suppose. although I'd say that her family history is kind of intresting (seen up to 65 subtitled episodes of Naruto so far so I might have a bigger glimpse than you do about Hinata) and maybe that her crush/admiration of Naruto makes her less shy than what you may think. (not exactly sure, but I DO think that she did get a slightly improved character development than being a really shy girl) anyways, keep on writing and make sure that no one inflates your ego that could make you do mistakes and stuff.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: December 26, 2003 02:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story.
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Reviewed By: Mahina On: December 24, 2003 18:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Have you ever read A Game of Thrones by George R.R. Martin? Orion seems very similar to a character in it (Ceresi Lannister). Not just her...umm... relationship, but just something about Orion's manner reminds me Ceresi.
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Title: god of chaos 1st class licence unlimited licence unrestricted. secondary domain sex
Reviewed By: majin kirby the kami of chaos On: December 18, 2003 13:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like usagi/ranma matchups it's whats got me writing in the first place.. the story is really good. and i wish to see more chapters. i wouldnt mind being a character.. just use me.. the kami of chaos if ya want more info im me (aol)kamiofchaos or email kami_of_chaos@yahoo.com ja ne
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