| "dejavu'" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: dejavu
Reviewed By: Kyorocks34 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2005 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well the whole Naota a teen and Haruko coming back is really what everyone does. But it's really funny and fun to read.
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Reviewed By: eruo On: February 03, 2004 19:01 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you got it going on guy and or girl
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Reviewed By: Proplayer [MediaMiner Member] On: January 31, 2004 01:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Ok, this is just based on chapter one, but the one thing you should do right now is take the whole chapter out of the summary. And I think it's spelled Artimis or Atamas, or something close to that, need to check again. Other than that, I think it' pretty good. I wouldn't say it was the perfect continuation, but considering that the ending to the series wasn't really made for a sequel, you've done an ok job.
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Reviewed By: nightraider On: January 30, 2004 02:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i loved the tv show and this seems like a perfect continue-a-sion( don't know how to spell it) of it. and i think ch.3 wen very smothly like a pro did it. FLCL kicks &$%!!!
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Reviewed By: kiki mimi On: January 02, 2004 12:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
my god it was soo good. keep writing and hurry, i want to know whats going to happen
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