| "Claudine" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2006 16:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This is an awesome piece of work. Keep up the great work deb
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Reviewed By: Tsuki Doriimaa On: November 24, 2003 15:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was fantastic hun! I loved how you wrote Heero.. and it all from Claudy's 3rd POV was wonderful to read from. Extreamly long, but Gods I love 'em that way! And it's undoubtably worth it!! Wow. heh Great one darlin'!! (9 for grammer 'cause some spots you had a word used in like a 'future' tense instead of 'present'.. like "he'll not fall" instead of "wouldn't fall".. doesn't sound right with "he'll not" there. ^_^)
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Reviewed By: MeLaiya On: October 27, 2003 20:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man that was great. Long as hell...just the way i like'em. Especially if theyre really good. I loved it. Please keep up the good work. Chow Babe ;)
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