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| "Laila Bli Cohav (a night without a star)" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] | Title: Beautiful
Reviewed By: Rrasik On: February 24, 2011 11:48 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I read it once before; I can't remember how long ago (months? at least a year?). In any case, I love the depth of this story, the blending of the little girl's trials along with the struggle to keep Heero alive. Your style of writing is very expressive and detailed, and I can easily imagine the entire story while reading. Easily a 10 out of 10. This plucked at my heartstrings, and I was hard pressed to hold the tears back. Beautiful work. | Reviewed By: CYOA Athrunxyou luver [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2004 03:50 EDT
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*sniffles paheticly* That made me cry!!! I don't cry for fanfics, at least not this bad!! It was like watching Toboe of of Wolf's Rian die again!!! Only this made me cry tears of happiness at the end where Wolf's Rian left me wondering if I'll get to make sure Toboe and the others survive to find paradise this time. *sniffles again* I hopre to read more of your stories, but right now I must be off to bed. It 2:00am here. And it is an Injustice that you don't have many reveiws for this!!! It was moving and very wonderful yet people are to pig headed to reveiw!!! I feel ashamed to be considered part of the fanfiction comunity!!! Its like voters not voting cause they didn't want to have to waist energy pulling the stupid lever thing!!! *glares at all non-reveiwers*
| Reviewed By: Tsuki Doriimaa On: November 23, 2003 23:39 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Kami... I cannot believe you've only gotten ONE bloody review for this story! @_@ That's unbelievable! Totally bites the big one, and I mean that seriously. This story was frickin' fantastic! I'll look over your not believing in Ghosts deal ~_^ ...heh but seriously. I loved reading this one! If I get the time, do you think I could archive it on my TDTA site please? I'd be honored to. I loved reading the parts between Heero and Samantha. You wrote them all so well... and the discriptions were excellent! hehe Kamis, it's just a wonderful story to read! You did great hun. I wish ya all the best in your others!
| Reviewed By: black beauty On: October 26, 2003 20:42 EST
Comment/Review:
Different, but at least is has a happy ending and I love happy ending fics. Keep up the good job.
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