| "Born Again" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: correcting myself...
Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2004 04:09 CST
Comment/Review:
ignore comment about Duo not being able to control himself... I'm still reading the story and it pains me to have made such an oversite. Gosh, i'll try to make sure I'm totally awake next time. Wow, your story is so emotionally charged, I don't see how anyone could possibly read it with feeling something. Ooooh and Relena, i want to bop her sometimes...
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 25, 2004 07:00 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAA.. i'm only at ch7 at the moment but what a story!!! sniffs... why Duo Why... I was hoping Duo could control himself and poor Heero- he really didn't need that. Please let be some way that Duo can make it up to Heero and them to still be together. that Baka... Thank you for writing such a great story!! sniff can't wait for it to be updated!!
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Reviewed By: Memine On: October 29, 2003 21:11 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, I don't have any constructive criticism to give you. My definition of good reading, something worth reading, is based purely on how much it move me. I cried reading your fanfiction. I was a bit disappointed without how it turned out in chapter 10 but it understandable and make sense. I mean after all Heero has been through... but I was still expecting some other possibilities though. :P ::shrugged:: I enjoyed reading this very much. ^^
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Reviewed By: dostil On: October 28, 2003 19:57 CST
Comment/Review:
well at first I like your history but I dont like the fact of heero and duo dont being a couple if you think of continue this fic please try to put they together its just dont fair for the poor duo espero que pongas continuacion no me gusto casi el final heero y duo no quedaron juntos
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Reviewed By: nekojin [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 13:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I won't lie, I was very upset by this story. You make Heero and Duo go through all that and then they just split up? You should have another warning in your summary saying 1xOC and 2xOC because all you have there is 2x1 and that is misleading.
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