| "Make me Real" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 20:40 CDT
Comment/Review:
Just curious as to whether or not you're going to finish this. I want you to know that this is still in my bookmarked section right now and I still think it's a really good story. I hope you continue it.
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Reviewed By: Kawaii Kitty On: January 12, 2004 06:27 CST
Comment/Review:
Cool. I like your fic; it's quite interestign and different from the few other Escaflowne fics I've read. Poor Hitomi! I hope she and Van meet real soon. I've only actually seen the first 4 episodes of Escaflowne, but I can understand your story without any problems. Keep up the great work/writing! Cya!
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: Lianne On: November 11, 2003 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm impressed. I'm guessing you don't have more reviews because of the listing under "Escaflowne" instead of "Vision of Escaflowne"...and because mediaminer.org simply doesn't get the attention of fanfiction.net. But I have to say I'm impressed. That other reviewer is right--your writing has a surprisingly mature style about it, something very rare in newer authors. You have a distinctive and unique prose that's engaging and features that very careful half-hazard style that's not *actually* half-hazard; it's very difficult to reflect the almost dreamlike emotional turbulence of characters through the actual turbulent prose. Your creativity in presenting your story is even more creative than your interesting plotline. Please continue; I know *I'll* be there.
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Reviewed By: sorceress_sarrkh [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 02:48 CST
Comment/Review:
...wow... You'd better finish this. I really like this and you actually write really well for a so called newbie. I bet you were lying about that new part tho becuz i know authors aren't this good. The storyline so far is done really well and i can't help but love how dark it is. And then when she nails him with that pencil... :) Very cool. Seriously keep this up and going.
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