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| "Falling Apart" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Thomas Hunt On: January 21, 2004 17:03 CST
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Well, since you have ten people, I'd say that you have a good fanfic. I think it has good potential, better than all of my stories as Last Knight. :-)
| Title: I wanna Join!!!!
Reviewed By: Desire69all4u [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2004 17:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Name: Yuna Horitaru Gender: Female Age: 17 1/2 Race: Saiyan Physical Description: Medium height for any average 17 year old girl. Eye: One blue, One Green. Skin: Light tan. Hair color: Brown, Yuna hair style, (Final fantasy X-2)Simply enough, looks like Yuna from Final Fantasy x2 with the cloths from above. Clothing/Accessories: Short blue Jean skirt, White and blue sneakers, red muscle shirt that has a Nike sign, blue jean jacket(open) has tattoo of large Roaring red highlighted tiger on back of jacket, clear lip gloss, Rainbow painted nails, a string necklace of a tooth hanging at bottom, two ear holes each side with shark teeth, one pair of blue finger showing cloves and a mood ring on middle finger. Powers/Transformations: Can we say she is a reincarnation of Broly? PLEASE@!!!!!!!!!! I really want her to be powerful, but the thing is that she hates her saiyian heritage, because her her saiyin blood killed her parents. When she transforms she has blonde hair with brown highlights. When mentioned about saiyins or her saiyin culture she scolds the person or glares evilly, or just simply walks away from conversation. Personality: I keep to myself, although I have my moments very yusuke (yu yu hakishow) or just android 18 Evil or Good: Both, I want to switch times though, like I don't know where I should belong. Live or Die: Live!!! Romantic Interest: Vegeta, Trunks, Android 17, Radditz Friends: has none, likes to keep to self though likes to have conversations with Kami Enemies: Everyone, although she has her moments were she trust those around her...
| Title: Can *I* Still Join?
Reviewed By: Pocket Rat On: January 02, 2004 13:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Pocket Rat Gender: Female Age: 15 Race: 1/2 Saijyan, 1/2 Android Phy. Description: Has Radditz-like blonde hair, #18-like dark green eyes, 7'7, and a robot-like tail. Clothing/Acessories: Femalized Vegeta outfit, black knee-high combat boots, a black and red ragdoll cat that watches you everywhere you go, and a scouter or Lulu's outfit from FF 10. Powers/Transformations: All the SSJ forms, and Vegeta and Radditz's attacks. Evil or Good: Kinda like Vegeta and Piccolo. Live or Die: Live 'till really big bad guy comes thenis brought back to life by the Dragonballs. Romantic Interest: Vegeta or Radditz. Friends: Radditz, Vegeta, Piccolo, Your Character (I forget alot....sorry!), Videl, Gohan. Goten, and Goku. Enemies: Ms. Haha (Hercule),The Screaming Banshee (Chichi), Pervert (Master Roshi*), Blue-haired Donkey (Bulma), Weakling (Yamcha), Three-eyes (Tien), Mr.Mime (Chautzu), and Shrimp (Krillin) *= Master Roshi tries to follow me everywhere, 'specially the showers. I can't get an account so email me at vegetaluver181@yahoo.com when you write more. Ja ne! ~*~*~*Pocket Rat~*~*~*
| Title: I love your story.
Reviewed By: Brittany On: December 26, 2003 13:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NAME. Arianna GENDER. Female AGE. 18 RACE. 1/2 Saiyan 1/2 Human PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION. Dark Brown Hair, Medium length. Blue/ Green eyes. about 5'4'' CLOTHING/ACCESORIES. She wears a black tanktop with a gold dragon on the front. A jean jacket. A pair of tight cargo flare pants. Addidas shoes. Tatoo of thorns going all around her upper left arm. POWERS/TRANSFORMATION. Can go super saiyan but rarely does. She can also do instant transmition. EVIL or GOOD. Good LIVE or DIE. Live ROMANTIC INTEREST.Trunks FRIENDS. Trunks, Gohan, Goten, Goku, Vegeta ENEMIES. Bulma, Chi-Chi, and Videl
| Title: Hiya!
Reviewed By: Crecy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Crecy Gender:Female Age:18 Race:Saiyan Physical Description:Hight is about 5'4, red hair, green, eyes. Skinny, but strong. Clothing/Accessories: Wears black, baggy pants and a dark red tight shirt. Black gloves with cut off fingers and a neclace that she never takes off. the necklace is a dark blue cresent moon. Powers/Transformations:Black super saiyan. Eventually gets to 4 after awhile of sparring and training. Hair turns black and eyes turn black. POwers are norm, like ki blasts an flying, but she can also Contol fire. Evil or Good:Good Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest:Trunks Friends: Goku,Trunks, Goten, Gohan, Bulma, Piccolo, Chichi, vegeta, Videl Enemies: Yamcha, Yajarobi
| Title: Falling Apart
Reviewed By: kakodragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2003 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Artemis Vera/Kako Dragon Gender:Female Age:17 Race:1/2 shadow guard 1/2 sayin Physical Description:Mystic green hair and black eyes She is a very much Vegeta in disposition. Her life started in her planet being destroyed then her brother trained to fight and sent her to Earth. He makes her forget her other life. Clothing/Accessories:She wears a blue halter top. On her back is a shadow guard tribal star. She wears cameo jeans and wears her hair in a crown Powers/Transformations:She can uses shadows to her every will. She is telekanetic and telepathic while she has all of her sayin powers. She can street fight. She also can call upon the bird of shadows to help her. Evil or Good:Good Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest: Piccolo Friends:Goku, Trunks, Goten, Gohan, Bulma, Piccolo, Vegeta, and videl Enemies:chi chi and master roshi
| Reviewed By: whiteblaze On: November 09, 2003 12:57 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
name: kyosuke Gender: male Age: 17 race: full blooded saiyan physical description: short spikey black hair(like gohans at the cell games), with light brown eyes , and he's around 5'7", and has a tail. Clothing: has a black trenchcoat with black saiyan armor under it, and gray boots and gloves. powers: can go ssj and a weak ssj2, can teleport and can move incredibly fast. Also he can perform the Galic gun (the attack vegata used to try and blow up the earth), the destructo disc and a energy sword. good or evil: neutral(but alittle on the evil side) Live or die: live Romatic interest: none Friends: Vegeta enemies: Hercule *evil smirk*
| Title: Love the Story!!
Reviewed By: Taiyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Taiyoukai Gender: male Race: Saiyan/Human hybrid Age: 17 Physical Discription: Short, spiky auburn-brown hair (combination of teen Gohan's and Goku's hair), 5' 9" tall, green eyes (combo blue and yellow), auburn beard, auburn Saiyan tail ( 3 ft. long), compact body structure, moderately muscled (for a Saiyan). Clothing: armored silver trench-coat; weighted black spandex, long sleeved shirt with blood red trim; weighted, blood red gi pants with black trim; black combat boots; blood red sweat bands on wrists Powers/Transformations: Super Saiyan 1; Ultra Super Saiyan (trained extensively to learn to move faster even with the bulky muscles); Super Saiyan 2; Bloodrage (power-up similar to KaioKen, but without the endurace drain); matter/energy manipulation ( can tranform energy into solid objects: swords, clothing, armor, etc.); Barrier Shield (defensive energy sphere); Mega Flare (energy attack wave formed like the Kamehameha Wave); Kamehameha Wave; Utlima Weapon (broad sword: 5 ft. in length, permaently solid though made from pure energy, with glowing blue edges); Masamune (Japanese long sword, made like the Utima Weapon); Shadow Flare (Pure Dark energy wave technique performed like Final Flash); Bakryuuha (Dragon Twister): powerful ki wave resembling a horizontal wind that cuts through the oppenent; Final Judgement (black/violet energy wave with lighting curling around the beam; formed by putting one hand, index and middle fingers up, with the other fingers curled in like a fist, toward the oppenent; takes all the negative energy of the user and casts it as pure destructive force) Affiliation: neutral (predominately good, but haunted by his dark past) Live: live Romantic interest: any female DBZ character stronger than an average human Friends: Goku, Gohan, Vegeta, and Trunks Enemies: Mr. Satan or anyone that thinks that these techniques are tricks
| Reviewed By: Harm On: November 04, 2003 05:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name: Harmeny but who ever calls her tat dies, she prefers the name Harm Gender:Female Age:14 Race:Full Saiyan Physical Description: is very pale and has black with streaks of red. Spiked hair at the bottom, it doesnt stand up. hair goes to the bottem on her neck. She is skinny and doesnt look strong but she is stronger than Gohan and Goten with training. Clothing/Accessories: A black shirt with the words 'I'm right, your wrong, any questions?' black pants with a chain attached. has a spiked choker and has black nail polish on almst always Powers/Transformations: She has the ability to go ozuroo and with training is able to go ssj then up to ssj3 Evil or Good:half and half Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest:Piccolo Friends:Trunks, Piccolo, Vegeta Enemies:kakarot and all the spawns of him, yamcha, roshie, bulma, chichi, videl, tien, puar
| Title: Damn, MM.org keeps making me logout everytime I go to this story -_-;
Reviewed By: M.Q. [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2003 19:46 CST
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Yeah...it keeps making me log out *grummble* Anywho, nice idea!!! Can I be in this? I just wubble interactive fics, they so fun nd anything can happen =^-^= (I'm in lik, tons of interactive fics already, but oh well XD ) Name:Jesse Hudson and/or MQ Nania Gender:Female Age:15 Race:Saiyan Physical Description:Dark brown hair (waist-length and usually braided w/ a peice of colored cloth braided in it), dark blue eyes, 4'10'', 97lbs, saiyan tail Clothing/Accessories:A tight black tank top with a dark blue armband on right upper arm, black jacket, baggy black pants, black boots Powers/Transformations: can go oozaru and ssj,can controll powers pretty good but easyly loses temper therefore easyly loses controll of powers, can step through solid objects (tecnique is called 'ghosting') Evil or Good: Neutral (is that an option?) Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest:Vegeta Friends: vegeta, trunks,Goku, Gohan, Picollo, Goten Enemies:Chi Chi, Bulma, Master Roshi, Yamcha, OK...yeah...this outta be fun =^-^=
| Title: first one
Reviewed By: heatwave On: October 27, 2003 16:46 CST
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NAME: Shiro GENDER: Male AGE: 17 RACE: Saiyan PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION: Has long spiky black hair(like teen Goten), as tall as gohan and has a saiyan tail. CLOTHING/ACCESSORIES: he wears a black jacket with a blue shirt, jeans, and black boots. POWERS/TRANSFORMATION: can transform into a super saiyan, and is working with Goku for his ki attacks. EVIL OR GOOD: Good LIVE OR DIE: live ROMANTIC INTEREST: videl or anyone FRIENDS: Goku, Gohan, Goten, and Piccolo. ENEMIES: Mr. Satan (cann I hurt him)
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