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| "Falling Apart" Reviews/Comments [ 26 ] | | Pages (2): [ 1 2 › » ] | Title: me
Reviewed By: freelova [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2007 18:01 CDT
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Keke(like kee-kee) Gender:female Age:15 Race:Saiyan Physical Description:She has extremely long,silky black hair in a ponytail. Clothing/Accessories:She wears green khakis and a blue halter top with a diamond choker and low heels. Powers/Transformations:Like all Saiyans, she transforms into a gigantic ape (called an Oozaru) when the moon is full. When she crosses between dimensions her physical body changes to fit her race. She has total control over her ki; her emotions control her powers until she is trained Evil or Good:Evil but has a good heart. Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest:Turles(let him be alive,puh-lease!!!) Friends:Hmph,who needs them? Enemies:Chi Chi,Bulma,Videl. I'm new. Have mercy!!
| Reviewed By: LadyTonyaSerene [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 12:51 CDT
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Name:Tonya McGowen (but most people call me Serene) Gender:Female Age:17 Race:Human Physical Description:tall with hip lengh black curly hair,sparkling brown eyes and cream colored skin Clothing/Accessories:I wear a bright red t-shirt with a black dragon on the front, black flare jeans, black army boots, black leather duster and a red bandana in my hair. Powers/Transformations:Can move things with my mind, heal people with just a touch, incredably strong, can use earth, fire, wind, and water to defend my self or others, can brieng people back to life when they die and can talk to people using my mind no matter where they are. Evil or Good:Good Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest:Trunks Friends:Goku, Trunks, Goten, Gohan, Bulma, Piccolo, Chichi Enemies:none
| Title: Can i be in it? please?
Reviewed By: SesshomaruInuyashaKagome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2004 18:59 CST
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Name: Meg Gender: Female Age: 17 Race: Saiyan Physical Description: tall, built, tanned, skinny, 5'7, blonde hair with highlights to the shoulders, usually worn down, in a ponytail or bun, and baby blue eyes Clothing/Accessories: a college t-shirt with the name "Cal Poly" on it, sweats, matching sweatshirt with hood, and tennis shoes or work out capris Powers/Transformations: like all saiyans. Can't exactly transform into super saiyan. But can do all the other things that saiyans can do. Evil or Good: Good Live or Die: Live Romantic Interest: Goten Friends: everyone Enemies: none
| Reviewed By: Kudo of the North On: September 11, 2004 11:53 CDT
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FRIGGIN UPDATE WILL YA'?!!! YOU HAVEN'T UPDATED SINCE MAY!! HURRY THE *BLEEP* UP!!!
| Title: am i to late, can i be in?
Reviewed By: spendragon87 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 22:05 CDT
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Name:Cassandra Gender:Female Age:looks 18 Race:Saiyan/dragon demon(plz?) Physical Description:She has long, black hair, silver eyes change color w/ mood, and she has a long, furry black Saiyan tail. Cass's 5'11,pale and looks under weight, she gets dragon wings when she loses controle of her emotion. Clothing/Accessories:baggy pants,black sleeveless shirt reads"if i through a stick, will you go away?"sleeveless black trenchcoat,steal-toe black boots,silver pentagram necklaces,fingerless black gloves, black ans silver CD player w/ behind the head headphones. she has her tongue pierced, her ears pierced 11 times. Powers/Transformations:un-Like all Saiyans, she dose nottransforms into a gigantic ape (called an Oozaru) when the moon is full. She turns into an exremly large wolf. She has limited control over her ki, and is considered unstable, her emotions control her powers until she is trained fully. Cassabdra can summon dragons(sommons at randome a Scythe Drake, Rift Dragon(can creats rifts between dimensions), DeathWyrm Dragon, or a Chaos Dragon) but it takes a huge toll on her energy and when her anger gets the better of her Dragon rage(she turns into on of the Four dragons untill her anger is goon, at this point she is condidered unstabel and uncontrolable) Evil or Good:nutral(sp?)Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest:Goten Friends:Trunks, Goten, Vegeta Enemies:NE! who is not her friend
| Reviewed By: Kagome009 On: July 29, 2004 22:50 CDT
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Hey! Sorry but I forgot to mention my romantic interest. Its Yammcha since Trunks, Goten, and Gohan have been taken a lot.
| Title: Pick me please!
Reviewed By: Kagome009 On: July 29, 2004 11:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Akira Gender:Female Age:16 Race:Saiyan! Physical description:Long black hair that reaches past her rear end with red streaks,black eyes,5'9 in height,black eyes,long monkey tail, usually quiet but has a bad temper and goes into a rage if mad and someone calms her down. Clothing:A black sleevless shirt(not tangtop or spaghetti strapped)that comes up above the stomach a little, black shorts, black fingerless gloves, and black boots. Powers/transforms:Turns into giant ape at the full moon. Absorbs energy from the sun to make a Sun Beam, Kamehameha Wave, uses giant ax made from her energy, Dooms Day Bomb that is also an energy ball that can destroy a planet if I wish to do so but takes up a lot of her energy, and has extremly good hearing. Evil or good: Good. Live or Die: Live! Friends: Goku,Gohan,Goten,Trunks,Yammcha,Krillan,Bulma,Vegeta,Master Roshi, and anybody else who I don't put in villans. Villans: Videl,Hercule,Pan,ChiChi.
| Reviewed By: sundancer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2004 17:46 CDT
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Name:Kim Gender:Female Age:15 Race:1/2Saiyan 1/2 human Physical Description:She has dark blonde hair that in a braid, hazel eyes, abit shorter the goten. Clothing/Accessories:She wears a a black t-shirt and black jeans with white and black sneakers a silver neckalce with a pheonix pendant black leather fingerless gloves and a black baseball cap thats on backwards Powers/Transformations:can transform into a gigantic ape when the moon is full. can control fire and has a pretty good control over her ki and has the power of empathy Evil or Good:Good Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest:Goten Friends:Goku, Trunks, Goten, Gohan, Piccolo, krillin, Yamcha Enemies: the evil guys, Hercule
| Reviewed By: PheonixFire On: April 26, 2004 08:22 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Name:Pheonix Gender:Female Age:17 Race:Human/Tayisan(I just made up that race) Physical Description:5"4,121bls,long wavey brown hair,silver eyes,slender lean athletic build, long legs. She always has a cold stoney expression, but smiles sweetly when she lets her guard down. Clothing/Accessories:Short sleeved tight white tee. Black semi-flare pants. Spike-heel black leather boots. Black chocker around her neck with a silver dragon charm hung in the centre. Powers/Transformations: Above average strenght(grows even higher with taining). Fast and resourceful. Uses moves from breakdance class combined with martial arts. When fueled by extreme emotion a great orange pheonix entity appears behind her and she takes on it's power in a blaze of fire, never remembering much afterwards. She can also read peoples emotions even when they try to hide it. Evil or Good:Neutral/Good -has own agenda. Live or Die:Almost die/live. Romantic Interest:Trunks (that is if it's set when he's around 18ish). Friends:Vegeta (we get on cause we both can't stand Kakkarot.We train together) Enemies:Master Roshi, Kakkarot I really hope you decide to pick this up again - it would be so good!!
| Title: suck
Reviewed By: ghk On: March 21, 2004 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
this sucks
| Title: Sorry
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 15:55 CST
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Sorry my computer was acting up!
| Title: Um
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 15:54 CST
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Name: Micky (Short for Meclina) Gender:Female Age:171/2 Race: Demonic Angel( Half demon, half angel) Physical Description: Long midnight black hair with sapphire eyes and a light tan. She's 5'5 1/2 to 5'6" Clothing/Accessories: She wears dark (almost black)blue bellbottoms with different color tee shirts. No pink, yellow, green or brown. She doesn't really like those colors. Powers/Transformations: She uses spells but she can fight and use a sword pretty good. When she transforms, she only does this at the greatest emergency because it hurts when she does, since she's half demon half angel she has wings. One wing is an angel wing,white and angelic, the other wing is demon, black and demonic. She can unleash a great and terrible power once in this form. Evil or Good:Good Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest: Trunks or 17 Friends:Goku, Trunks, Goten, Gohan, Bulma, Piccolo, Chichi, Videl, Vegeta Enemies: ummm..... she pretty much likes everyone Side note: She's a taurus!
| Title: I hope I'm not too late!
Reviewed By: Melli [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2004 14:54 CST
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Name: Micky (Short for Meclina) Gender:Female Age:171/2 Race: Demonic Angel( Half demon, half angel) Physical Description: Long midnight black hair with sapphire eyes and a light tan. She's 5'5 1/2 to 5'6" Clothing/Accessories: She wears dark (almost black)blue bellbottoms with different color tee shirts. No pink, yellow, green or brown. She doesn't really like those colors. Powers/Transformations: She uses spells but she can fight and use a sword pretty good. When she transforms, she only does this at the greatest emergency because it hurts when she does, since she's half demon half angel she has wings. One wing is an angel wing,white and angelic, the other wing is demon, black and demonic. She can unleash a great and terrible power once in this form. Evil or Good:Good Live or Die:Live Romantic Interest: Trunks or 17 Friends:Goku, Trunks, Goten, Gohan, Bulma, Piccolo, Chichi, Videl, Vegeta Enemies: ummm..... she pretty much likes everyone Side note: She's a taurus!
| Title: room for another person (i hope)
Reviewed By: dark lance [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2004 16:15 CST
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NAME:lance GENDER:male AGE:18 RACE: saiyan 50% DESCRIPTION:no tail, tall as trunks,dark blue hair (like ss gohan teen) WEARS: red headband black gloves black vegeta stlye boots black goku suit only black outside red inside. abilitys super saiyan almost ss2 only knows one move (for now)super solar flare blinddes and hit them with ki energy. good guy not bad: living: wants bra really bad!!: freinds : goten trunks gohan goku pan and bra(hehehehe) DISLIKES: vegeta piccolo anybody who wants to pick a fight against him
| Title: Hey you still writing
Reviewed By: Kakodragon/Artemis vera On: February 02, 2004 23:33 CST
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Hey um could you change love intest to vegeta or trunks plese for me on my description
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