| "Deep within lies the truth" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Reviewed By: Ranuel [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 22:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are some really sweet moments here and the ending is just pure evil goodness. There are some technical problems like a change in tense mid sentence and some spelling errors that really should have been caught and corrected by now. A very good if flawed story. I agree that a sequel with Miroku and Sango would be fun.
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Reviewed By: Demonic_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2004 14:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Wow, can't believe no one reviewed ur story, it was very good
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Reviewed By: Jensempai101 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2004 13:58 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
y the hell wont the color thing work?!!! ive alredy tried to do it twice dammit!!!...argh...oh hi! sry for that! goooood story...sooo kawaii!!!....woodnt mind a sequel tho...!!!
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 20:19 CST
Comment/Review:
BRAVO!! 10 for everything! im too lazy to go thru all the lil rating thingys lol
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 20:13 CST
Comment/Review:
lol u thot ud b deleted for posting a lemon? there are def worse (as in more graphic) ones out there. i like ur story. its so cute. i have enough cavities but hey wats a few more?
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 20:00 CST
Comment/Review:
aw that was so cute!!
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