| "Dad Finds Out" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Savara On: November 08, 2003 15:26 CST
Comment/Review:
Savara:YAY! Raven:That's about all you'll get from her. Savara:Hey! That's mean! Rena:Yeah, that's Raven. I'd love it if she'd shut it.
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Title: Kinda boring
Reviewed By: HotsummerYami [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 22:08 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this story is kinda of a little tooo boring. WHERE IS THE HENTAI?!!!!!I WANT IT!!!!!!! NOW!!!!!!*starts pulling out her hair and jumps over a cliff* *_*
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Reviewed By: Taylor Flor On: November 06, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I likeie. A bit short. Please keep writing!
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Reviewed By: Momma Cat [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 01:16 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
I will like it when a lemon appears.
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Reviewed By: Phidias Bagel On: October 28, 2003 20:59 CST
Comment/Review:
More! More! I hate the suspense! CONTINUE!!!!
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Title: Mm, needs spacing
Reviewed By: Sweetdeily [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 23:29 CST
Comment/Review:
I like it. Very nice, very realistic. But WAYYYY to short!!! You must make it longer, and more detailed and mmm, Seto/Jounouchi... *drools* Good! Keep up the sweet work, honey! ~.^ I'll be looking forward to the rest of it.
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Reviewed By: Mary Ann [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2003 11:33 CST
Comment/Review:
You have to continue because what next?? WHAT NEXT??? WIll the dad face charges for what he did?? WILL HE?? I habe to know
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Title: Continue?
Reviewed By: Zani [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 21:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like where it is going please continue.
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