Reviewed By: Sai_Saishi [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2006 06:32 CDT
Comment/Review:
Aww ^^ that acomplished very little other than progressively growing more depressing, but it was well written and who needs to acomplish anything at all in a story? There was one error in gramar... in the very start.... but hey, that's pretty darn small and rather insignificant ^^; I liked the story, it had great descriptions and flowed nicely. I liked how it was told from Duo's POV, that was fun ^^ Over all I enjoyed it greatly, nice job *-^
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