| "Soccer Freak" Reviews/Comments [ 6 ] |
Title: I dunno
Reviewed By: Saiyuki~Fan On: January 25, 2004 22:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic. Please feel free to e-mail me when you update. :) ~katie amber_benson_fan2003@yahoo.com
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Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2004 20:06 CST
Comment/Review:
I can't wait for the next chapter! Poor tortured Tai. Hope nothing goes TOO wrong o.o
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Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2003 15:22 CST
Comment/Review:
daaaaaawwwwf! :D how CUTE! I really want to see more of this. This fic is just too adorable! I wub Yamachi :D o.o um.. hope your evil writer's block goes away. That's never fun -.-
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Title: Soccer Freak
Reviewed By: Taito4eva On: December 14, 2003 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's got angst in it and the thrill of danger and love. I love Taito and I'd love to see this story continued asap. Hope nothing too bad happens to Tai with his abusive Father. Please carry on.
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Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2003 07:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
Grammar and spelling is much better! It's written better too, I think. *nodnod* I love this even more, and I want to see Tai and Matt hug, because they are so cute! .. o.o yes, please continue. You've definetly got my interest!
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Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2003 02:32 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
You need to go back and spell check this. Also the way it's written...it's not descriptive enough. Try adding more detail and sentences, and don't use the same phrases over and over again to describe stuff :) Just trying to help! This is a pretty good fic. I really like this so far, and I would love to see more! You've got talent.
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