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Reviewed By: Kitsune Spyk [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2004 17:22 CDT
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aww kawaii. so fluffy. your first huh. wow youer a natural. i loved it.
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Reviewed By: motorrace On: December 01, 2003 02:40 CST
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holy shit, this is your first, really? wow, very well done, and the cuteness factor is up past the roof
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Reviewed By: Mr. Vegita On: November 06, 2003 22:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First one huh? Very good for afirst one, really. I remember my first one, a goku/bulma I believe. Good job.
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 20:46 CST
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wow, thats a first lemon? thats amazing for one. i havent read a yamachi in ages... anyways, keep writting more!
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Reviewed By: Lullaby On: October 29, 2003 19:35 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really it's your first ??? You must read a lot of lemon to write it so well! I really loved the way you made them act so cute! ^_^ REALLY GOOD job!
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Reviewed By: jenna On: October 29, 2003 11:43 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the lemon
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Reviewed By: I love Yugi and Davis [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW COME YOU DIDN'T TELL ME ABOUT THIS!!! Oh well totally excellant!! Do more lemons or I'll sick Riona and Sora on you! mwahahahaha
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