"Dying Note" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Reviewed By: nanashi09 On: August 27, 2005 14:26 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: It will suck unless there is a second part to the story. ;)
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Reviewed By: Lady Silverwings [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2004 00:46 CDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I agree. Is a sequel too much to ask for? I'm such a sucker for a happy ending. Maybe have Heero realize what an utter and complete FOOL he is for choosing the Perfectly Pukable in Pink Peacecraft and come CRAWLING back to Duo, who of course makes Heero work for each and every precious second he spends with Duo and takes a SADISTIC pleasure in doing so, mwa ha ha ha!!! Sorry. Dorothy moment... Anyway, good work!
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Reviewed By: Moon Dazz On: October 28, 2003 21:05 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Aww, a bastard Heero story :(. I enjoyed it a lot depite that. I loved the way you wrote Hilde, and her relationship with Duo. Maybe a sequel could be written to this if I am not asking too much. *makes big chibi eyes* Pwease???
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